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for Sweet Substitution

by demonwing12846

person Aresy
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Always like a heero/duo fic. Good idea with the romantic movies lol. I would just work on making it more clear about who was talking and who was doing things..i was a bit confused if duo set and watched tv or heero. I think it is duo but i felt a bit like you didn't introduce the speaker and his actoins clear enough. Just an observation, but i still liked the idea.
person tandy
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Loved it.

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