rate_review Reviews

Well, the sex scenes are very detailed but there is so few Piccolo literature out there that ill take what I can get. Also, I don't know if its because there are stories previous to this one but there are a ton of gaps....even while reading its....jumpy. All of a sudden they're switching bodies and the pronoun he/she thing is pretty confusing, and then they're suddenly back in their bodies, and then all of a sudden they're at Capsule Corp for...? What reason? Idk but thanks for posting a lemon with Piccolo in it!

MOMO!!! UPDATE! NOW! I READ THIS AGAIN AND I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Squeals and huggles pillow*

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! "Like rabbits." PERFECT ENDING! Vegeta was perfect, and Goku's naivete and denseness were on spot! OMG MOMO, THE SMEX WAS INCREDIBLY HAWT! I thought my eyes were going to melt out of their sockets when he told her he wanted to hear her scream *drools* OMG HE WAS SO DAMNED HAWT! THIS IS THE YUMMIEST OF ALL YOUR SMUT! He was in perfect form, and Nozomi was along for the ride, which is an awesome time to be shotgun XD HAWT, NAWTY, DELICIOUS, EXQUISITE, MAGINIFICENT!!!!!!!! This was a perfect section *glomps, foaming at the mouth* YOU BETTER GIVE ME MORE SOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMFG MOMO!!!!!!! Very NICE! Me likey A LOT!!!!!! Vegeta wasn't OOC at all! It's him playing head games; it won't be OOC as long as it has a twist where he was right all along and the show between Nozomi and Piccolo proves him a master planner XD This was fantastic! AND SEXY! SQUEEE! I love how she told him to get acquainted with his right hand rofl XD VERY NICE!!!!! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOOOOOON!

OH.....MY......GAWD.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *TACKLES* THAT WAS SO-SO-DELICIOUSLY EXQUISITENESS NAWTY!!!!!! Those are the first words that come to mind!!! =3~~~~~ HAWT MY FRIEND, TOTALLY HAWT!!! I'm simply dying for the update. GET TO WORK ON IT ASAP!!!!!! <3!

*Has been wiping up her nosebleed for the past 15 minutes* Dude, that was so fucking hawt, I can't even think from the blood loss XD I really can't wait for the update! It's going to be slightly weird to read Piccolo getting fucked as a girl, but hey, I'll manage XD Great job!

WELL! Very nice! Can't wait for an update!!!!!

OMFG MOMO!!!!!!!!!! PICCOLO FOUND HER STASH! NYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *dies laughing* UPDATE SOON!

MOMO! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!? THIS IS DELICIOUS!!!!!!! I CAN'T WANT FOR MORE! GIVE ME MORE, DAMN YOU!!!