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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like where this is going
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, i didn't think you would ever come back to this story
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Like this story how come you haven't finish it?
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I took a hiatus back in July Dont worry I have not given up on the story or any of mine...School came first for a while.....
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chap #4
WOW... i think Trunks's needs to return the favor.. don't you..
WOW... i think Trunks's needs to return the favor.. don't you..
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do believe this is my second review!
I think the story is progressing. I
hate the idea that he's probably going
to hurt Pan with this Monica girl, but
a story needs a little heart break! Keep
writing!
I think the story is progressing. I
hate the idea that he's probably going
to hurt Pan with this Monica girl, but
a story needs a little heart break! Keep
writing!
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm digging your story here. You're a
great writer. I'd like to see more
chapters like these two. Great Job! Oh,
this story reminds me of 'Lolita' a
little. I think that's why I'm truly
getting hooked by it. Keep it up!
great writer. I'd like to see more
chapters like these two. Great Job! Oh,
this story reminds me of 'Lolita' a
little. I think that's why I'm truly
getting hooked by it. Keep it up!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
different from the other, in a good way.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Yes me again, that annoying reviewer from Fanfiction. ;) Really good start, you got here. Though I just love TP so it could be me. Anyway you're going great so far and keep up the good work. I have to quit now but as soon as I have time I'll go read and review the second chap.
So I'll be back! Muahahah! Sorry... weird mood again...
Yes me again, that annoying reviewer from Fanfiction. ;) Really good start, you got here. Though I just love TP so it could be me. Anyway you're going great so far and keep up the good work. I have to quit now but as soon as I have time I'll go read and review the second chap.
So I'll be back! Muahahah! Sorry... weird mood again...