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OMFG!!! This was the best FMA fic I have read thus far! I'm going to fallow your story untill the end!!

gah, so depressing...
I am impressed with the way this chapter flows naturally, unlike versions of such events I've seen in other stories. please update soon!

I almost cried as I read this chapter, this is one of the few times I curse my overactive imagination. I could see the whole thing happening. Poor Poor Ed DAMN YOU COLONAL BASTERD!!!!!

*murders Mustang for Ed* Man, I'm really hating Roy right now....
I know it might disrupt the flow of the story, but I really want to see Hawkeye's reactions as Ed tells her this stuff. And is he telling her all of it? Or just the jist? Or what?
However, I will understand if you don't switch back to the original scene until the story's end.
How long will this be? 'Cuz it seems like you could probably end it in a few chapters, if you wanted.
--tati1

God, this still hurts so bad...I am not sure what to say other than wow, this hurt for me. Ed's fear and helplessness is very visceral...you've given us enough to understand why someone so physically powerful can still be so trapped by this ;_;

Eek, scary Roy! That was just so cruel, not even making an effort to let him not suffer too much. Plus beating him, he's kinda lucky he survived, even with leverage agasint Ed. Poor baby. *cuddle*

oh! poor Ed. so close to freedom XS...so horrible

kiki

I've been reading this story awhile, but I'm only just reviewing now. Sorry. I'm such a fan of Roy/Ed Slash but this is written so WELL and I'm an angst-whore, so I HAVE to read it. Not to mention your a great writer. I can't BELIEVE Roy raped him. I always thought it'd be a softy-molesty sex scene. Sadness. ::tear::

So yeah, It's really good. I love it. There's 2 more year until Ed kills him, right? So, during those two years will there be a couple softer-molesty sex scenes? Gosh, I'm a freak, but even though I know it ends with death, I want there to be SOME happiness! WAH!!! Bawl, cry, sob. -_- Your a great writer though, did I mention? Oh! And I'm pretty sure -not positive, 'cause I'm no psychic -but did Roy's dad molest him? By the way he talked about him when his mom died, it seemed that way. Did you mean to hint at that?

Okay, well, keep going, I love it!

Love ya -Aly

I am trembling right now, it's unbelievable. You really captured that... really, really captured what it was like... To think Edward hasn't cracked by now at such a fragile age is beyond me... of course it makes sense because Ed is a strong boy with a purpose in life that he will not give up.

*I feel so bad! I actually heard Vic Mignogna's voice in my mind when Ed was being tortured.*

Anyways, I think the scenario is very befitting and that you really captured the essence of the situation, I was even getting naseuous over reading it. I could feel what Ed was feeling and it was terrible and I'm still trembling, which is crazy.

I really admire you so much for doing this. RoyEd is personally one of my favorites and to use such a popular pairing as a way to get an opinion out... it's very noble of you and I keep saying that because it is. I really, really appreciate it.

Anyways, happy... hold on, let me remember what all today is...

Happy Hitler's Birthday! Happy Weed Day! Happy Hokie Hope day! Happy Anniversary of Columbine! (did I miss something) It's like today was cursed or something... when I say happy, I'm being sarcastic... ^_^' Reading this right now really reminds me of the things going on around in the world and around myself.

Well, your description is perfect and I can definitely put myself in Ed's position... I can even put myself in CrazyBastard!Roy's. Very intriguing indeed. Anyways, your addicting stories never fail me... I think you are my favorite FMA yaoi fanfiction writer. Yep. *worships*

lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard

p.s. ONWARD ON YOUR NOBLE CAUSE, I'M BEHIND YOU ALL THE WAY!!!

There are so many thoughts and feelings running thru my head right now it's kinda hard to know what to say first. I read this chapter yesterday and was so distraught when I finished that I couldn't write a review to save my life. I don't know if I should be impressed or distressed that you can write so well about so horrific a subject. The rape scene was written so well that it made me sick to my stomach. I mean that as a compliment even tho it sounds awful. sorry. You managed to evoke a very strong gut reaction with your eloquent words. Ed's pain and horror, Roy's rage and brutality, the sheer hopelessness of the situation all came thru loud and clear. Ed considering killing Roy at the end of the chapter was especially moving. "Ed didn’t think he’d actually be able to kill someone...even someone like Roy Mustang." And then my tears fell in earnest. so much pain. so dark and foreboding. such emotional turmoil. It just breaks your heart.

One of the things that pains me the most is Roy's character. Roy is my favorite character in the series (after Ed of course!) and it truly hurts my heart to see him behaving this way. Sadly, I have firsthand knowledge of how terribly painful it is to be subjected to an alcoholic abusive authority figure (i.e. parent) so, in a small way, I can relate to Ed. Don't worry tho. I never endured anything even close to what Ed is going thru so no need to call the cops! :) Oh look. I'm making jokes. There's an obvious defense mechanism! Why I told you that I have no idea. I just mean that I can feel Ed's pain on a rather personal level so, yeah, this chapter was really distressful. Seeing Roy acting like some pod person, some twisted evil twin of the Roy I know and love, is particulary appalling. I already know I'm gonna be reduced to mass of emotional goo when Roy meets his end. I can feel my chest tightening just thinking about it! Granted this Roy is not my Roy but it's still gonna hurt like hell when he dies. *eyes well with tears - again! :)* Even tho he deserves to die for what he's done, there's a tiny part of me that can't bear to see it happen. gah. I'm such a mess right now. I need to go cuddle my Roy plushie dolls and try to get my head in a better place! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I'm so glad you already knew about the Hermaphrodite doujinshi series! I was somewhat hesitant to mention them because I was afraid that you'd think I was implying that you were plagiarizing them. Whew! That's one less thing to worry about! :) Those doujinshi were the first thing that came to mind once I really got into your story so I felt had to mention them consequences be damned! :D