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for The Sound of Silence

by ZaKai

schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow a wonderful angst filled wriet as per usual.

Keep it up
person dana
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh was roy being abused by his mother (that's my thought). this was a really great chapter i can't wait for your next update.
person IZZY and his PC
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. he apologized! But judgeing by the first chap id say it doesent last long. this is a great story, and its sad that shit like this really happens :(
person Blissful Ignorance
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kind of feel bad for Mustang... And Ed... And... Yea, bascially everybody. ^^; Ha ha, loved this chapter, it really showed a different side of Mustang and, finally... The scary old men didn't attack Ed
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pout* Everytime I read this, it makes me more sad. poor Ed, still not sure what's going on, and Roy's just as screwed. Excellent job though.
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's been a while since I last read this! I know how much this story bothers you, but your still doing a fine job of it XD. sorry i'm not more chatty XS i'm still in work mode

kiki
person tati1
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh; that's an interesting development.
Who the hell keeps their mom's ashes in an open bucket??
Seriously though; very interesting insight into Roy.
--tati1
person Nate_River
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Keep the good work, okay?^^

I know that is a fic to show the terrible abuse of a child...but could you write the sex parts, please?

Thanks!XDDD
person morningstar
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as usual, a very good chapter, even if it took you very long (not that I'll blame you for that^^...I am very slow too), and also good description of the whole wanting/unwanting thing^^ I'll impatiently wait for more
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's 'cool' (but not really) that Ed has a reaction to Roy's neighbourhood and walking through it. how he makes the connection between that and what Roy does to him very cool and subtile, nice

kiki

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