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that poor kid. =(

It's hard to leave a cheerful review for something this serious... This is definitely one of the most disturbing things i've read, more so for being so utterly realistic. Not that i think Mustang's likely to abuse children, but if one was to imagine that he was, this is about how he would act... and how Ed would respond. In other words, this is so well-written that it's disturbing :) This fic makes me think of Velvet Mace's "Vulnerability", if i recall correctly. That was an extremely disturbing one-shot, here it's drawn out and all the more painful for that.

The issue this fic deals with is definitely grave and i'm really GLAD it's coming out so dark and disturbing, because it would be plainly wrong to write on this topic and radiate joy. People need to know how horrible it is. I know someone who has been abused, although not to this extent, and i have to wonder whether it's left scars and lasting effects. I have to say, i'm very glad that you've started out by saying that Ed's killed Mustang - god, it would be horrendous to read this and know the bastard's still alive and well.

Sorry for this long ramble - but it's your own fault to write fics that elicit this kind of a response :) I can't say reading this has left me in good spirits, but this was a piece of very good writing and i will continue reading it out of masochistic joy, or something =)

I hate to not leave a review, because I love your writing, but it does make my tummy feel really gross. Roy's just so gross and poor Ed is trapped. Well written.

Yay! I'd be looking out for your story here instead of FF yeah? :) Keep up with the good work. And Mustang's so evil! XD

Uh, very dark. Soo painful to read, still...I have too! It is one of a kind. You write well and handle the issue of abuse well. In its darkness and pain and sorrow, it is acctuly kinda beautiful. I'll be waiting for more chapters

*Stabs Mustang*

I think that's all that really needs to be said...

Wonderful work as always, you bend my emotional state to your will as always!

aka aino hikaru

this story feels like it was painful to write, its painful to read sometimes, but its still ... i dont want to say /enjoyable/, but its like a car crash almost. i have to say your doing a great job with it though, and i /want/ to keep reading even if it hurts a bit. poor ed... *fic love*

;_; Again, you manage to really make this visceral and it hurts. I am amazed you can survive writing it, it must really hurt :O

Oh poor ed!!

Its sad though i like how you have dealt with this issue,
most people don't go into the physique of the victim,
but you have written this story quite well so far
keep it up

Wow.

This is so heart-wrenchingly well written. You've captured the characters wonderfully . . . Your Roy makes my skin crawl with loathing, even as much as I ADORE Roy generally. . . You've made him a very believeable pedophile without compromising the character.

In short: ZOMG THIS IS SO AWESOME!

Update or I will bite you REALLY hard.