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Interesting. i look forward to more. this is useful for understanding

wow another good story by you!! i really hope you find time to update this one, its an interesting idea. Also i would love to get updated so i know when your story gets new chapters.

I was lurking around the FMA-stories when I fround yours and started reading it. First of all, I like your writingstyle. The way you started your story was amazing. Picking FMA was probably a good choice because of thew age-difference between Roy and Ed.
I, myself, work at a daycentre with young children and it sickens me to hear stories about children being abused (in any form) by parents, friends or other people. It destroys a child for life and makes the people that try to help, feel helpless.
Anyway, it doesn't matter that you made the characters OOC, it proves a point and gives a clear message about childabuse. Keep writing.

ja ne^^V

Aw, man... god, poor Ed.

That's a really, really good reason to kill someone though.

I'm gonna cry. And freak the fuck out over what Mustang's doing to him. In a way I'm glad someones finally doing RoyxEd as nonconsensual .... without making it porn ... there's something real in showing it like this.

Ack! Update soon!

Oh my. This is very well written.

Your very good, so far this has been one of the most tasteful fan-fiction's on this subject that I have seen and had forced under my nose by a friend.

Well done!

-Bookmarks the pages.-

wonderful chapter!And Roy had managed to become even creepier! I'm sooooo looking forward for chapter 4!

I'm really glad that you decided to press this issue to make it known to more people. Sex isn't just associated with romance, it's also a very cruel thing when you are being forced. Child abuse happens way too often... and... it's really like this. You really feel like you wanna throw up and there's always this knot in your stomach... And that group of men, ick, it's too real. It makes me want to puke. And many people really do burn themselves in showers to clean their unpure bodies. Thank you for making this known, please e-mail me when you update this. shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com Great job, btw.

:O Wow. This is really, really painful and powerful. Poor little Ed just wants to be loved...and in this AU with Roy taking advantage of him so completely...poor kid.

This has hooked into my emotions and I'd love to see where it goes next!

Hey! Just wanted to let you know that you've hooked me! If you could be so kind as to send me an e-mail when you update, I would be ever so grateful!

Yours
hpgirl18