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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *WAILS* So disturbingly sad! How long are you going to torment us like this? The interaction between Ed and Al was so gutwrenchingly heart breaking! Ed, oh Ed! You should have ran away! *cries*

*sigh* I look forward to and dread each chapter of this story. I wanna know how it ends, meaning I wanna know what it finally took for Ed to kill Roy *cries*, but I find myself worrying so much about what Roy might do to Ed next that I read each chapter all tensed up and anxious. I guess it's a good thing that the story is so intense that I keep coming back for more. Glutton for punishment maybe? XD I'm not at all surprised Roy, well, raped Ed after getting him drunk. There is no other word for it. Even though Ed went willingly to Roy's place, he did say no when Roy started groping him. *sigh* I guess this is the beginning of the end for Roy. ;_; It really broke my heart when Roy said, "I regret too, Ed. I just don’t know [how] to stop...". (You left the word "how" out of that line btw.) Roy knows what he's doing is wrong but just can't help himself. He is broken and suffering and has no hope of escaping his inevitable end. That, my friends, is the true tragedy of this whole nightmare. Roy can't 'do' any better because he doesn't 'know' any better. It's hard to believe we're so close to the end of this! wow. I'm wondering if Ed will get some kind of clemency from the state after telling Riza his story. Surely she won't let him rot in jail after hearing his side of the story! *cries* I hope Ed gets the help he needs so he won't end up like Roy. The circle of violence has to be broken. Ed was so despondent when he started telling his tale. Maybe finally telling someone what happened will be kind of a catharsis for Ed. I hated seeing him looking so bedraggled. He has Al, Riza, and the freedom from Roy to encourage him to live again. I hope he hasn't lost all hope just yet. :(
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Koneko =^.^=

I've read every chapter of this story. I've followed it since the first chapter, but I can't tell you how is difficult for me to review it. Every time I read a new chapter, I cry like a baby (but I cry with Sailor Moon, too, so maybe is a problem of mine! XD). I don't feel any hate for Roy or Edward, even if they'ld deserve it (Roy AND Ed, because to scary like this a child doesn't have excuses!). It's a descendent spiral in which they're trapped. They've so much rage and sorrow and regrets inside that is part of themselves. It's sad. It's a wonderful job, I've already said this. And i wanted to tell you that even if I can't review every chapter I read and love it even if every time I finish my kleenex supply. There must be a sort of masochistic side of mine, I fear! XD Thanks for this story.

mustang is sick and he's bringing ed down with him. ed doesn't know whats right or wrong anymore...

update soon please!!!

ASOTA

what the! did Roy drug ED?! Beer's not that good...well, true Ed's never drunk it before but STILL!!

anyway I sense a conclusion coiming on XD

kiki

I end almost every chapter just thinking Poor Ed. I will add Poor Al into this one. I felt for him in this chapter. We can understand why Ed's acting the way he is but Al doesn't understand it at all and probably thinks it's his fault.

I really want to see the next chapter, knowing that we'll finally find out the beginning and what happened when he killed Roy. And maybe we'll get a little of the background behind Roy's comment at the end. We, or at least I've, been reading this story like Roy's just a bastard who doesn't seem to really care what he's doing. But this makes it seem like he might actually feel some remorse for what he's done to Ed, and maybe that something might have happened to him when he was younger. Makes you wonder.

I can't wait for you next update. I've been waiting for this chapter really, been wondering what it was that could have driven Ed to kill him. And seemingly in front of Al. Definitely makes it seem like Roy might have tried something with Al, or maybe to Ed in front of Al. Hmmm....

I love this story... I'm just twisted like that for some reason.... It's written really well and you can really feel for Ed.

**Passes out due to the HEVAY angst***

Poor Ed, you captured that entire situation like ... WOW

Good Job!!!

wow this is incredible. Theres no way I could ever relate to this, but the way you portray everything is like you have first hand experience and GOD Im just so unbelievably sorry if anything like has EVER occurred with you and of course with anyone else. No child should EVER have to go through that kind of torture. I know it happens everyday and it truely breaks my heart. I commend your portrayel of this story and I really hope you update soon and keep up the incredible work.

Wow ... um ... This story is really good. Like, almost completely accurate. Continue, please.