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for Pure Evil 3: Return of Pure Evil

by sefiru

person Bikki
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oozaru sex. Your sexual creativity never ceases to amaze me and satisfy my latent desires for such eloquently written stories. These have made my evening and will cause my brain to stir up delicious sex scenes during my sleep.

Your stories need labels of "Warning: May Cause Spontanious Orgasming".

I enjoyed the addition of a little more plot to flesh out the stories, even though i don't mind at all reading just your electrifying sex scenes.

Brava!
person pun_xy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh! I won (barely)! Imagine that. Eh, lesse, what kind of kink do I want? Hum, hum *taps chin in thought* I guess... I guess something with food, and I do have a fetish for bondage and teasing... Something, something slippery, like, I dunno, syrup? Yeah, or ice cream. Ooooh, hot versus ice cold! Or something like that, I dunno, you're the genious, you wirte ;3
And I'll wait eagerly for the Mirai thing (and the one-shots of course!).
Love you (and that you brought Bardock back, he's so cute).
person macha
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so love your Bardock! :) The fight was well written. I would have never guessed who it was...which is why I didn't make a guess.

Hmmmm, so, If the portal lets one person through at a time, I wonder how long before Videl comes over, or Gohan goes back that way.


hehehe, Piccolo falling through the portal. That was great.

person pun_xy
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! A whole chapter just with Mirai! So happy XD, thanks <3
And that lemon in chapter 6 was delicious! I just love Vegeta/Goku(/Kakarott) *drools*
Oh, oh! My guess for the evil mastermind issss... Dodoria? Naw. Someone we thought was dead, right? ...shit, this was hard. Freizer? Naw. Okay, I'm gonna go with that other guy that was with Freizer, whatever his name was. Or maybe Freizer anyway...
In any case, thank you so much for contiuing this story.
Love you! XD
person pun_xy
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, right! My guess for the evilmastermind isss... Dodoria? Naw. Though someone we thought was dead, right? ...shit, this was hard! Freizer? Naw. I think I'm gonna go with that other guy that was with Freizer, whatever his name was. Or maybe Freizer anyway...
In any case, love this story. Chapter 6 was droolingly delicious *drools*, just love Vegeta/Kakarott smuts!
Thanks for continuing this story <3
You great, yes you are!
person Yuurei
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Mirai's attitude toward King Vegeta..err..former king..priceless. And lemony goodness...oh the lemony goodness.. Great chapters. Update again soon.
person Macha
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sadly to say, I haven't got a clue as to who the villian is. *sighs*

OH, Chapter 6 lemon was HOT! mmmmmmm....Makes it difficult to think about things to comment on for chapters 4 and 5.

4, Vegeta making the mistake was interesting. Kakarott's response to Vegeta's response was interesting. :)

5, There is a 'Gohan' in the place of what I think you meant to be 'Goten'. Poor Mirai, that job can't be fun. I wonder if we'll get a chance to meet this person who is showing interest in him.


Well done!
person Yuurei
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, and being so, I just had to run back and read Pure Evil and Pure Evil 2 (loved them equally). Vegeta in a collar...totally hot. I can't wait to see what Namek holds in store for them. Update again soon. <3
person Macha
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked seeing Kakarott's day to day life without the interferance of your lovely lemons. :) Of course, I hope the WHOLE story isn't like that. *snickers*
person pun_xy
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you continued it! [b]So[/b] grateful!
And Gohan's such an easy tease ^^.
Can't wait to see what happens next, like the rule thing, that should be fun ;3

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