rate_review Reviews

Wow, although grammar and sentence structures were a bit confusing, this was really well written. And I'm glad someone decided to step up and write GreedxDorchet. It was smexy and yummy and I hope you write more with Greed soon!

Thank you! I really love the idea of Greed x Dorchette, and you pulled off this PWP very nicely indeed. As for being OOC I don't think you are. Dorchette has all of like 3 lines in show, so you had to invent a lot of his character. I think you did quite well, making his behavior logical and consistant with his backstory. Greed himself seemed spot on. I like the bits of backplot you stuck in.

There is only one thing that jarred, that was use of the meta word "fangirlish". Greed would hardly know what a fangirl is, and even if he did, he certainly wouldn't liken himself to one. Seeing fandom specific slang threw me out of the moment and reminded me that I was a fangirl drooling over a fic.

*glomp* Thank you soooo much for writing this fic! You're 110% right, there is NOT enough GreedxDorochet on here, or anywhere! In fact, there's not enough Dorochet fic out there period. Poor Dorochet, he deserves so much more. Thanks for spreading the Doro love!!

**TACKLE GLOMP**
you are so my hero.. let me say that before the rest of my brain melts out my ears..
on another note
**guh**
omg i think my brain imploded

damn straight there ain't enought dorchet anything out there! its soo sad! now if i could find a dorchet/havoc my lifes goal would be complete lol.