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Marty Sues, anyone? Please. Over rated is over rated.

I'm going to review the Highlights and Chronicles in their own review section rather than here. Hope that's okay (still a bit new here so don't know the rules).

Thanks Redcatt, I'm reading them now.

The cute cub pelts, political intrique, Kakarott's possible insanity, Brolly, it's all keeping me completed immersed. I'm up to chapter 7 of the highlights so far - long way to go, yippee.

PS. Just wanted to add that I discovered you wrote the Monkey Moon/Shine series whilst I was looking for these, so want to add my praise for them as they are some of my favorite fanfics. You Star!
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If you want even more House of Vegeta, check out House of Vegeta Highlights and House of Vegeta Chronicles. These are separate stories that will fill in the gaps. This is the main continuity storyline. Highlights and Chronicles go back and forth in time and are not in chronological order, but they point to the main series.

Finished the last chapter now.

Great info and details about power levels, education, tails, the Saiyan code (furball one was my favorite).

Last but one chapter (41) was a repeat of a chapter 2, so that confused me, and the last chapter seemed to jump ahead, missing out how Kakarot became pregnant. Was it planned? I would have liked to have read about the conception, discovery, and discussions around it, especially between Vegeta and Kakarot. Maybe you could do a flashback to it during the sequel.

I will be looking for the next story The return of Rhuntek when you post it.
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I'm up to chapter 33 now, only 9 chapters to go!

Loved the embarrassing baby stories. Gosh isn't Kakarot eager to have another chibi? Will Vegeta let him though? With all the chaos the moon/gamma rays are doing surely there will be chibis everywhere!

I'm left wondering what Frieza will taste like cooked, and frustrated that no-one read the archives yet.
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I've read up to chapter 24 now.

This is such an intriguing story. I love all the politics and secrets. I also like how you are telling all the various histories. Also, the little details such as the types of food, tail signals, smells.

Makes me wish I were Saiyan (sigh).
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it's a good story but i'm slightly confused with the last chapters...

I think I've read this before somewhere but never had a chance to review it until now, so I'm reading it from scratch again.

What a story, I love a good epic. You've gone into how Saiyans might have lived in such wonderful detail. I can really picture it.
Kakarot was so funny panicking when Vegeta went into labour, calling the Ou father and dragging him out of bed, and the howling at the end of chapter 18 to mark the births read so natural for them.

I'm only up to chapter 18 so far so will review as I go along, probably only about 6 chapters at a time so long way to go yet :-)
Thank you for writing such a riveting story.
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I've read your stories before and are glad your back. great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!