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love love...ive been waiting for the new chapter

This is great, I'm not sure why you didn't get any reviews....kit-kit hardly counts, she makes up the bulk of your reviews, but if she really likes this...I don't know why that is... Anyhow, I really like these stories and am glad that this time you made chapters. Don't get discourges and stop writing, some people really don't know a good fic when they read one. But I'm just one person so...(shrugs). Well, I know I liked it and I hope you have some more. I hate seeing realy good fics with damn near no reviews. It's because people are so used to reading certain authors. What you want to do next time is not post all of the chapters at once or in too quick succession. You wan't to wait for the reviews to come in PER CHAPTER. Not one or two reviews for the entire fic. Pace yourself, bide your time. That's all. If you plan on coming out with another story, do this and wait for the reviews. People are reading and liking it, they just have to get up some nerve to tell you. I did, and I ain't shy about it! You are too talented to stop now and I see you as the queen or AlternateUniverse. I'm not being to forward or kissing ass, it's what I feel and so I hope you like it. Please do explore other pairings and plots. All of your fics don't have to involve Saiyans on some distant planet ALL THE TIME. It could be Saiyans on other planets, even Earth would make it a kind of AU, because Bardock, and the others don't really belong there so...that's just an idea, you don't have to listen to me but I was just saying. I like your stories and I know how fast your are with the updates so don't be shy to step outside of the box sometimes, you do but maybe you should do it more often but you don't have to change your writing style. Geez, this review is getting long....Well I'll just end by saying, that you have some serious talent there and there will always be people reading, and aside from kit-kit, some will occasionally review. It's a problem on aff.net, really, and so don't worry about it. Until next time, Alas!

wow this quite a sayian code, some of them are very funny

wow if we had some these class school would be so fun

wow very funny

wow i love how creative you are not everybody take the time to explain stuff like this

cool this is really needed with all the other characters in the story

wow now i know everybody power level, atleast in range

wow you made alot of oozaru transformation

wow love it