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Dude, whoever you are, there is a warning up top and it's not even remotely graphic. Also it's her/his fic and statistically speaking the author is correct about living on the streets. I think he/she is trying for realism to contrast the fact that this fic is about being warped. Great job so far!

You've GOT to be kidding me! It's getting so GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Look I really enjoy your writing, and our story was going fine up until the piont where you made that guy rape Duo - that is just fricking cruel, and not everyone on the streets has to be a hooker, and even tough the majority of them are, there was no reason to make Duo one of them. you just lost yourself a reader - next time, try not to be so stupid!

Werd bro!

This is really different from the norm and I'm really enjoying it. Please update soon.

TALENT!! My Gurl dat is real talent. I really gotta
hand it to you!! I extremely shocked but anyways I
want you to keep on writin 4 me. Please!!?? The story
is really good and can Duo be a virgin bc I love innocent
virgin Duos!? ^_^ It would make the story so much better
because my friends and I were reading it and we all got
aroused so quick dat is don't make no sense. Thank you
for writing this truly artistic great story.
Yours Truly,
Ms. Desperate
P.S. Da name says it all I'm not ashamed of it either because
honey I know Im desperate!