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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*head falls onto desk and body spasms* Dear lord that was sexy. It took forever but I enjoyed all of it. I mean, ALL of it, from the beginning to end. I loved the interactions between Goku and Gohan, I loved Gohan's obsessive, violent nature. The smut was perfect and dirty. Wow! Kinda having trouble saying stuff about this fic because there was so much of it and I can't tell you EVERYTHING I liked about it. Just, *claps* great job. As for an answer to your earlier review, I have no problem with writing a topGoku Soncest story :D Would be my pleasure.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much emotional trama for Gohan... and such a lovely ending. I'm looking forward to that sequel!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great fic! (very hot too!!)
*scurries off to read the sequel*
*scurries off to read the sequel*
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT! HOT! HOT! pleease, keep writing!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for the plot lines! It's all fiction so no reason for any infinite number of pairings and possibilities to not be explored! You handled the development very well, the story keeps the reader fascinated at all times, and the progressional time line just sweeps you away with it.
*Loves the Teen-Gohan-ness!* There should really be more stories with Gohan in them, almost everything in the Yaoi section is GokuxVegeta, GokuxVegeta, GokuxVegeta, GokuxPiccolo... hehe... but anyway, I think your story is a great addition to this section, it will definitely remain one of my favorites from now on!
Where a sequal may be nice, this story actually makes a wonderful stand alone, but do hope you continue writing none the less, I'd love to see other stories you publish!
Gosh this story makes me want to talk about it more, but since this is only a review, I'll leave it be with very nicely done. Was one of those stories that made you wish you could actually be the character! Till next time!
-Revu
*Loves the Teen-Gohan-ness!* There should really be more stories with Gohan in them, almost everything in the Yaoi section is GokuxVegeta, GokuxVegeta, GokuxVegeta, GokuxPiccolo... hehe... but anyway, I think your story is a great addition to this section, it will definitely remain one of my favorites from now on!
Where a sequal may be nice, this story actually makes a wonderful stand alone, but do hope you continue writing none the less, I'd love to see other stories you publish!
Gosh this story makes me want to talk about it more, but since this is only a review, I'll leave it be with very nicely done. Was one of those stories that made you wish you could actually be the character! Till next time!
-Revu
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting. it wasn't just like pwp, it was great! and hot!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit uncomfortable with the pairing, but you did a great job portraying the feelings and thoughts of the characters in this story.
Each person's introspect was colorful and descriptive.
I look forward to the sequel. Kudos.