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for Golden Apples

by Xellass

person yohlenyaoilover
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story needs to be finished! Its so freaking amazing!
person Faith Kazama
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You say in your notes that you hope that Kai is not too OOC but is has to be obvious to you that he very much is. PWP doesn't mean that all the normal rules go out the window. It means that it's all about the sex.

Also, I'm pretty sure Tala and Kai are the same size but you have Kai swimming in Tala clothes. And I'm pretty sure that even if your Kai hadn't formally learned to defend himself he still would've fought back when being raped. Seems like you've taken uke!Kai to the extreme.
person tigerlilly193
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAP3!
oooohhhhh love the love sex! kais so cute! GREAT CHAPTER! I REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM BEGGING U ON MY HAND S AND KNEES TO MAKE CHAP 5 SOON! ILL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY AND DESPERATELY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE!
person tigerlilly193
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap4!
poor kai! having to deal with borkov! i really cant wait to read what happens next! I REALLY CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I REALLY AM IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER AND STORY! SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM BEGGING U MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON!
person misange
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I'm seriously becoming addicted to your stories. They are harsh and true, you don't skip the difficult parts at all if they go well with the stories; actually I think you thrive on does difficult parts, because not everyone would usually write such graffic sex scenes, some if not most unconsenting sex. The story s good enough to keep the PWP scenes interesting instead of repetitive and I love the way you describe the sex scenes: strong, highly hot and when you are doing the consenting sex extremely kinky and erotic (though that doesn't mean your rape scenes are not good, it is just that I don't really like unconsenting sex). I like this Kai a lot, strong despite the hard situations, and even though I feel bad for him because he has to deal with so many shitty situations. Your Tala here is quite charming though, I hope he is able to help Kai after all, scared or not. I admit that I read this BeyBlade fanfics expecting stories made by fangirls that wrote with what I call "chat lingo" with mary-sues abounding, strange japanese version of faces (such as TT.TT, that get pretty annoying when you are reading) and more than not cliched sex and love scenes (not that I'm saying they should stop, practice makes perfection they say), but I have been more than pleasently surprised by both your stories "Sugar is Sweet" and "Golden Apples", I must say that Kai as an uke is just too delicious on its own :p. I hope to read more from you, and hope you enjoyed this review!
Cheers,
misange~
person Rapunzelle
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it but poor kai, wheres yuri when you need him. Just one question who is vorkov. im not familiar with the japanese names as much. Please update soon.
:-)
person Laila
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god... poor Kai, he has been through so much..
please let him be fine again (with yuriy) so update :)
person mel
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome
person melissa
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait till the next chapter
person d0n'T-h@t3-m3-c@z-U-@iN't-M3
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UMMMM!!! that was totally delicious. DAMN you caZ i completely love ur work ;)
KAI-UKE is pretty rare cause only a few can pull it of.... so HATS OFF!!
& plz its a small request that plz kick tat b****** BORIS below the belt so hard that its a 1000times tat of wat he did to kai tat sick-perveted-old-bat AHHH!!! i sooo hate tat @$$*.
PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE update soon

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