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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Goten is so cute, I'm glad you write Gohan and Goten!
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! i enjoyed reading it.
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey ^^
Wow... hot story, really! When it comes to DBZ incest I actually prefer Vegeta/Trunks but... your Goku/Goten is just awesome!
Thanks for writing it ^^
Bye bye
R.
Wow... hot story, really! When it comes to DBZ incest I actually prefer Vegeta/Trunks but... your Goku/Goten is just awesome!
Thanks for writing it ^^
Bye bye
R.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tasty, just plain tassstty.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey o/ loved your story, mostly when I see one of Goku's sons in love with hime it's always Gohan, this was the first one with Goten. The only thing I find it weird is that I can't picture Goku talking like that. But it's sure as hell damn hot.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo!
wow... good smut... (drools).. now i'd like to write one with bardock and Goku, or Turles and Goku..... think you're up to it?
let's see... there was some mishap with dragonballs, someone screwed up, accidentally wishing back bardock/Turles...personally, that could be Chichi, trying to teach her wayward hubby some manners... buuut.... oh, it went soo wroong... in all right directions for our favourite saiyans, of course.
and of course, Goku is more sharp than he lets on...your portrayal of him is good, but some sneakiness wouldn't be bad... or some saucy remarks he could shut his banshee of a wife though...
So, up for an experimentation?
PS: Write me some, will you?
wow... good smut... (drools).. now i'd like to write one with bardock and Goku, or Turles and Goku..... think you're up to it?
let's see... there was some mishap with dragonballs, someone screwed up, accidentally wishing back bardock/Turles...personally, that could be Chichi, trying to teach her wayward hubby some manners... buuut.... oh, it went soo wroong... in all right directions for our favourite saiyans, of course.
and of course, Goku is more sharp than he lets on...your portrayal of him is good, but some sneakiness wouldn't be bad... or some saucy remarks he could shut his banshee of a wife though...
So, up for an experimentation?
PS: Write me some, will you?
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved this fic. not much of a fan of 1st person p.o.v but i really enjoyed reading this.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY someone got Goku's height right! 5'8" is what the creator of DBZ said Goku was, but everyone always says he's over 6'. Bravo on that point. I don't see too many incest fics, but I'm not offended by them. If they're written right, I enjoy them very much. You did a fantastic job here. The only thing I would have changed is I would've made Goku uke, hehe. I just think he has an uke personality, even if he can be a sexual deviant :)
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your DBZ stories are outstanding! They've broken out of that ordinary mold and become something extraordinary. Its great that so much depth is developed while keeping everyone as in character as possible. Hope you'll consider doing a Trunks/Vegeta pairing as well.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It would have been better if Goku had been more dominant