rate_review Reviews

I can't believe you didn't win anything for this! The writing is beautiful and the story is painfully tragic. One of the best FMA fics I've found.

I really like this fic alot! You play on some interestings ideas, and i'm a bit curious as to how Mustang and Shima share blood. I think your strongest scene was where Ed and Al travel thru the 'underworld' and hear the voices of the dead. Very moving.

My one complaint are the little spelling and grammatical errors that pop up. A beta would be able to help you with that.

I'll wait patiently for the sequal.

i like it so far, good writing.