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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot, me likie keep up the good work.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW,that was so HOT *drools*
That was a different pairing
but I like it.
This is a good one-shoot fiction;)
That was a different pairing
but I like it.
This is a good one-shoot fiction;)
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!SO CUTE.PLEASE WRITE MORE MAYBE A BRYKAI ONE.PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
loved it!!!!! and the ending..it's so cuuutee!!!! *-*
it think i lost alot of blood while reading this fic, with the nosebleeds and all..xP
more plz =^0^=
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
*massive nosebleed*
loved it!!!!! and the ending..it's so cuuutee!!!! *-*
it think i lost alot of blood while reading this fic, with the nosebleeds and all..xP
more plz =^0^=
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha^^ Does that mean Max was with Ray or is this a friendship...anyways! I loved it! I'd be kinda worried the lights would come back on all of a sudden though. I love the heat!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Please write more Tala Ray fics and inform me if you do.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT
i wish there were more tala ray fics in this world
i wish there were more tala ray fics in this world
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! Yuriy/Rei! I love this pairing. Very well written, interesting style. I only noticed a few tiny grammatical errors, nothing that hinders reading too much. Anyways, good job.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... i loved it.. so hot and nice.. :P