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Shit, ah, I'm almost lost for words, over here! It was that good. I loved everything about this divine but extremly long piece of yours, the plot was amazing and so was the characterizations of Envy and Edward. Furthermore I absolutely loved the atmosphere throughout the entire story, everything from the dark aura and the coldness along with the beauty to your well composed writing style.
And if it's really your first fic in english, then I'm more than awed, cos man this is probably one of the best one-shots I've ever had the pleasure of reading!

I love this to pieces I swear! And the ending was so beautiful and so sad!

Oh my G-d..... That is all I can say. That is incredible. Your use of language is sublime. Is this really your first fic in English? If it is I can't wait to see your next one. The ending was so powerful and I loved the repition of the clock. It was shocking to know Ed was poisoning Envy. But then it seems to be in character. After all Ed hated Envy for his vanity and the way he demeaned him. He has just as much pride as Envy and would want to break Envy to keep it. Though the suicide was unexpected... Keep up the good work!!!!!

Speechless, it was...Amazing, chilling, everything one would imagine a great story having.

I liked it lots! i dont know how to explain it ...
But i really liked it! Good Job ^_^

You are *going* to Hell, oh writer of beautiful, deadly wonders. And I will be happy to ride in that basket with you, if only you'll tell me a story on the way down. If I were half as brilliant as you, I'd be published by now. As I'm not, I'll content myself with my own miniscule writing skills and my own mediocre art, and hope that practice will eventually make passable. Long May You Write.