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for Unravel The Spider�s Web

by RiekaDeVolka

person ForbiddenIntimacy (too lazy to log in)
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved every word of this. Wrath is my ultimate favorite character in FMA. It's so amusing to read your fics and still revel at how severly you ignore canon. There's quite a stroke of originality here, and I'm loving it. I was wondering...since you do completely wacky pairings like submissive Scar and dominant Al--(which is unbearably hot)--maybe you could write a Rose/Wrath for me? It'd be another extremely original pairing that you'd be the first to write (maybe the only). But anyway, great writing! But I wish you'd have put the sources of the poetry and lyrics you included before each piece. And it would also be nice if you could've translated the spanish.

See ya!
person Safir84
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I absolutely loved this, so hauntingly beautiful! The way you describe Alphonse and Wrath is perfect to me and I also love your writing style in this one as well! Well done!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its been a long time since I read something this beautiful, and so horrible sad.
person Barefoothead
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant; really dark and emotional, genuine for every paragraph.

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