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I see that you only writin fucking grate two chapters for this stoy. I hope that you have not given up on it. I have to have more please please please update soon.

I vote for male-preg. with Goku as the mother.

HEY! I think for the pregnancy thing, Vegeta should be the pregnant one because he's smaller than Goku...so yeah, keep up the good work.
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I'm voting again for the cute Veggie MPreg! Why you ask? Because this is the second chapter silly, and that means you get two votes! At least, that's what I'm claiming. Radditz and Chichi together!!! *falls on the floor* Didn't see that one coming! And Gohan cries everytime he sees daddy. LOL That is too good. MPreg! MPreg! MPreg!

my vote es YESS, I love when vegeta gets pregnant
and Nice story, I hope you continue very soon.... pleasesssssssss¡¡

Oh Mpreg please! I love a preggie Vegeta! I think he's so as the uke and he's just adorable as a preggie! ^_^

hey! great story so far. I love that you made Gohan Chichi and Raditz's son. That was very cool ^-^ I also love that Gohan doesn't like Raditz LoL made me laugh. I also really loved Goku's reaction to his first view of Vegeta. ^-^ vote 1 for veg-preg.

I think your a great writer and you are making this into a fantastic story, but Im sorry to say I only realy like it in DBZ story's when Goku is the one to become pregnent, or if its a Goten Trunks story Goten ( bit byased arnt I ). I understand that you wont be changing your mind about whos going to deliver the baby and I think its fantastic that your sticking to what you want to do and not what others want to see. mabey in the future you will write a story were Gokus the prenent one but untill then I think I wont be reading any more of this story. Sorry

I loved this chapter, I dont know what part i thought was best when Chi Chi barrged into Gokus, and Raditz house with Gohan, or when Goku lost all basic functions when Vegeta stepped out of his space cappsual...Oh who am I kidding Goku drooling is alwas good for a laugh. I dont mind that its going to be a Vegeta is the pregnant one, story, I just preffer seeing Goku as the more submisive one, But I enjoy reading anything with Goku and Vegeta in a relationship, mabey you can have Vegeta as the visably more domonent of the relationship in the public eye. He seems more likly to be the one in control (prince of a population of 3) while Goku seems more the type to goof around aqnd then when the situation calls for it becomes all wise and strong.
Hope to see your next chapter soon

Very good story you have here! Please update soon!
BTW, preggie Veggie is cute, but let him be on top once in a while!
Looking forward to the next chapter!