rate_review Reviews

XD I love when is G/V and Vegeta personality remain intact XD not much people can do that sooo contrats!!! i love it!!! specially the end XD i dont feel sorry for chichi XD im a bad girl jajaja

Lemon Lemon LEMON!
=)
You write them really well. Reading your one shots first, so I can't wait to get to longer ones =)

Good job, keep writing

yah,i agree with kakarott. (without the cursing ^.~ but i agree! ^^ )

@mr. dictonary himself: i´m not "we". never was "we". -.-
i didn´t felt pitty and typed what i think. i always do.

so don´t you dare call me "we" again. -.-
speak for yourself, boy. not for US,or at least not for me.

besides, i´m very curious now. so why don´t you show US your fanfictions hon, WE deserve to read
some "exclusive words" from Mr. Fanfiction himself, don´t we heh ?!
...boy....
you really need a girl/bofriend ...a nice pet or something.
to be bored is no excuse to be an "§$%&/() , you got that?

Although I agree with Firebolt about "semen-encrusted hole" being gross, I admit I very much enjoyed "pulsating meat." :D I guess the appeal of certain language all depends on a person's taste. Overall I thought Lust was a fantastic and decadent little lemon. Nice job!

Oh, the disgusting piece of garbage labeled Word of Advice, here are some words of advice for you: Fuck OFF! Nobody cares that your jealous because you can't write a good fic for shit. Please, no one cares for your mean accusations and jealousy. I wish I were as good as Tyrana, she's great and I ain't afraid to say so. And it's a shame and Word of Advice, you, or both of you, kindly shut up and keep that shit to yourselves. Thank You

hi there, just keep on writing and don´t care about wannabe - comments, from jelous people who can´t write that well, they want to. it´s not worth to defend yourself. because as you´ve already said, you don´t have to, anyways.

i like your stories so much! playtime is my favou story from your´s. ^^
can´t wait, till you´ll find time and inspiration, to upload the next chapter! ^.^
take care and keep on your way of writing! believe me,
the´re still much more people who like the stories of yours, than other ones, who wanna be pain in the ass! ^_____^ yap.

may kami bless you d^^b
bye. :)

I respectfully suggest that you refrain from using terms like "pulsating meat". That and descriptions like "semen-crusted hole" from your earlier fic manage to completely de-rail your sex scenes by making them grotesque and funny rather than erotic. The basic premise of this fic was interesting, but your language choices are unfortunate.

WOW, you know how to write sexy stories! Perfect erotic writings yo!

That was so fucking great. I mean.. whew! HOT !