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for Live Without You?

by Echo13moon

schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update ^-^
this is a nice chapter too however what pairing would be in the end? as I'm hoping it will still be 2x1 and not 5x2 even you did good job on that
just please let it be 2x1
this chapter is reaalllyyy good i can understand heero's feeling of unsecured when gundam boys holing him up and sally tried to fix him up it's good...
and if you don't mind... please update soon as possible 'kay?!
thanks
person Mikinyet
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Heero at least the guys and Sally have helped him start healing physically. Valin got off lightly for what he did. Can't wait for your next update.
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter six is a nice chapter... as for the 5x2 even i didn't like this pairing but you wrote it nicely
I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter where duo found out that heero lived all these time while he kind of gave up on it
hope you will continue this story till the end as a lot of writers leave this story after it reach this point (No hard feeling as i'm no writers too)
I really hope you will continue this one
Thanks
person Mikinyet
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I didn't see them getting Heero bad this quick but you write a brill action chapter. You've got to wonder how Heero is going to react to being free and back with the others. Can't wait for your next update! :D
person Mikinyet
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Duo and Heero everything seems to be getting worse for them. I can't wait until the others find Heero. Hope you update soon.
person Mikinyet
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really dark but good chapter. I love how this is progressing. Can't wait for your next update.
person shadowdragon58
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow another good chapter. I wish someone would draw a pic for Duo dressed like that or if someone already has please share. Great update to a great story. Thanks for the hard work and please keep at it.
person Mikinyet
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad Heero is coping a bit better with what happened and is trusting Duo. I hope you update soon!
person shadowdragon58
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ilike this because Heero reacts both true and false to his character. You expect the events to change him and the bond with Duo however his cluelessness and reaction to things are what I would expect also. You manage to give a transition from him being the perfect soldier and explain the forming relationship. Great job again with this chapter.
person nana
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you! you work fast with putting up that last chapter..you deserve cake! ^^

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