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for Between the Lines

by Kali

person kik
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouuu ... that was *brilliant*!

I've not watched enough eps to truly grasp the workings of their relationship, but the few that I have seen reveal something achingly beautiful. And this fic, it was a homage to the wisp of love that you saw woven on screen.

I don't recall the last time I read such an easily flowing love story. I'm not sure that makes sense. It was pure, as love can be, but frail and vulnerable as hearts often are. I believed this is how it all turns out.

Enough of my rambling, just wanted to share how much I loved this and plead with you, quite greedily, that you continue to write TyKa.

Thank you for sharing, truly was an enjoyable read.

Hugs,
kik

person Liah
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even though I'm half asleep when I write this, I hope it comes out how it's supposed to. By that I mean a compliment on the basis of the way you write, what you have written and just everything the story is made of. You've done a fantastic job <3
person drake294
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Between the lines...
I want to say thank you for your great work!
And thank you that you share your thoughts about TyKa and that their love was really always been there!
*bows in respect*

yours drake294
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi i love your story it is good and i love the kai x tyson fic.... you can se that there is something going on between them in the real story... XD
person Jen
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kali!!!! whoa marvelous up[date dude!!!! So awesome!!!! The lemon was very smexyliscious and sweet and the whole telling the kids thing was ubercute too, the way you portraitthe kids was sooooo awesome and cool!!! Cant wait for the epilogue!!!
person kailover2006
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep updating please - how about kai getting pregnant - because something happened in his past with biovolt/ and he lied about gou's mum coz he is gou's mum and the dad(your choice) just and idea
update again soon
person TechnoRanma
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KALI YOU ARE MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!! That was such a great chapter.... You described all the scenes with perfect interpretation and the plot in way that is so unabashedly working towards the love...."The parallels were undeniably there, but I didn’t pay attention to them. Didn’t notice that I’d been ensnared long ago. " BAH HAH WAHDEEUOE... *_*!!!!!!! Oh GOD!!! This writing makes me feel things I haven't felt for so long. The tension and emotion between Tyson and Kai is tangible and you present it so its just lurking on MORE.... the best kind of style. I love it, and I would wait forever for more *_*_*_*..... Man I love this... and you of course. LOVE!
person annonymous
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
http:// www.cartoon-world.org /episodes.htm

Here u can get remaining episodes of beyblade. good luck.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grrr. I'm really getting sick of how impossible it is to find a subbed episode 48, or a script of the proper japanese episode. I want to know about this TyKa love confession or whatever that I've heard about.

On the fic - woohoo! I think it's awesome! But, awws, did you have to skip that bit from episode 48? Nobody I've talked to seems to be able to tell me anything about it. It's really annoying!
person jen
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YO!!!!! XD finally i get around and read this awesome piece of writing, im havingh a serious case of insomnia now i think XD so i startedreading and boy is this good!!!!1 Waitingh for the next part!!!!

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