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for Desecration: Feral

by sefiru

person Raholea
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries*
i'm sad to see it end... is that ok?

i just think feral goku- sorry, kakarrott (sp?) is utterly cool. and good vegeta, for acknowledging he can't try to survive as a human- HE ISN"T ONE!!! good boys... *tries to pat heads*

ok.. nmv.. i think vegeta just tried to bite me... *runs in terror*

I'll catch your next fic!!!
person kitkit
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved the lemon, it was short, but it went well with it
person Zofo
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Goten going feral too? Look out Trunks!

Nice touch to make it into a nature reserve, after all, they are an endangered species. Shame they can't breed. I would have loved to see feral cubs.

Thank you for an enjoyable read. I'll be looking for your next story.
person Zofo
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Vegeta has finally given in to his instincts, he didn't have much choice in the end, and isn't going to bother fitting in with the humans anymore. I love the idea of them living all wild and free.

Sad that the finale is next as I wanted more. I know, I'm greedy, but I'm sure the lemon will make up for it.
person Raholea
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* i was missing another chapter with the hot silver fox, so i checked out your dbz fics. and i found a new chapter here... *glomps*
for some reason i really like feral Goku. there's something more manageable with him like that. and i'm looking forward to the lemon next chapter. ~_^

*whines and begs for more*
person LainQui
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL it would be funny if in the end they all joined Kakarott
person kitkit
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it...i could of told vegeta that kakarott always gets what he wants
person Angela
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooo i decided to check out your dbz.....now i'm not sure which fic i want updated on fridays O_o

Loved this :)
person kitkit
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story, and i hope vegeta decides to put the saiyan porn to good use.
person Zofo
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The part where Vegeta had Kakarot chained and pinned him in a most vulnerable place was great, I want to read more, as it seems this was not an isolated incident, but it seems Vegeta may be regretting it or at least his body is it believes they have bonded.

Oh Vegeta now has Saiyan porn books, I want to hear more :-)

What could be wrong with Goku? Is it mpreg? Go to him Vegeta!

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