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wow im liking this alot

Vegeta's acting almost like he's going feral too. Is it catching? Even at home it was like he was trying to recreate the cave. I predict he won't be able to keep away very long this time.

I loved the howl Vegeta made to initially get Kakarot's attention, and the grunts, gestures and actions they used to communicate. Who needs words! It was a bit bloody with the dinosaur but perfectly in keeping with how I imagine a feral Saiyan to act, and the explanation as to why Kakarot was able to survive as a feral was very believable as well.

I'll be waiting for more.

excellent chapter. I loved the way how they hunt and interact. beautiful beast. kaka willingly let vegeta be on top. will the prince finally trust and let kaka take control .... I can't wait to see more.

Another great chapter ^.^ Seems to me that Vegeta is slowly becoming just as feral as Goku. Interesting indeed!

He had a mate. It was just a matter of going to fetch him.

This sentence made me go "Ohh yeaaah!!"

I’m planning to have those Saiyan instincts come back and bite Vegeta in the ass

Please do that as soon as you can *-*

Arrrrrgh! You're not updating?!?! After all of that and you're not updating!!!! If I could hate you I would, but your writing is just too d@mn great. COME ON, I wanna see the instincts bite Vegeta in the @ss! This is one of my favorite Desecration responses. Pretty, pretty pleassssssse write more of this SOON.

somewhat of a mess with a all the word bashing but good with the smut

Hehe, Goku gave a warning growl before leaving Vegeta. He didn't want him going, aww X3

wow i loved it, goku all animal like is a turn on

Awesome! I loved it ^.^