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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written and quite intriguing. It actually makes sense how Trunks's fascination with his father, and his desire for his attention, escalates to the the point that he sexually desires him. I was wondering if Vegeta had begun to suspect when he noticed Trunks's arousal, or if he just assumed that Trunks had been thinking about something else. That part wasn't very clear. Maybe that part was intentional, as a cliffhanger? Anyhow, I really like this. It's just so nerve-wracking to watch Trunks going through all of this, knowing that he plans to do something about it and not having any idea that it's wrong... How will Vegeta react? Will he completely freak out? I'm dying to find out! Please continue soon. ^_^
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God this is so amazing! I just love the way you write this and I'm begging for more!!
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a great idea, the Daisuki series. And how you start off with Trunks being all innocent and wonders is delicious.
More, yah! ;3
More, yah! ;3
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT...WAS....AWESOME! Ive read tons of fanfics( I love reading them:)) And that was by far the best TrunksxVegeta one i've ever read. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!WEEEE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK:>
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am going to MURDER you, if you don't continue. Hot damn, this story is good. But you want to fix the tenses, it seems mixed up at times. Is this what he would do, what he is doing, or what he did? The tenses sort of throw me off, but what a great fic, if you don't change that, if nothing else, that would be okay, because I loved it anyway. More, Please! (Serious splurtage of the nose, trying not to drown in blood...)