rate_review Reviews

loved this story...your a great writer...hope to see more ^_^

you write amazing sex scenes, did you know that? omg, talk about heating up a room! great job with the story. it was really intrigueing....i spelled that wrong...

Yours, Toby

I actually liked that, it was very interesting and so very touching. I also kinda liked the way you kept to the original concept of FMA, while mixing in a bit of your own stuff. Very nice! ^^

Hmm...

This had a very interesting concept to it. I like the way the mystery came together, what Ed was, how he had gotten to be that way. I like the idea that Ed is out trying to figure out what is wrong with him, that he knows something is but he can't really grasp it...that Al is running from the State. But if I can recommend that you change your formatting...everything runs together, that makes it hard to read @_@

Also, as for the ending...it felt like the fic was fairly tight, right up until the end where it is revealed Al is a vampire-type creature. There really needs to be more to explain what is going on there, not just in the A/N. As a plot point, it's important - don't sell yourself short :)

That... Was awesome! I really enjoyed this story, it was short and sweet, and it made sense, unlike many of the other fanfictions I've read. Great plot design/copyish... Thingy... Ha ha :)