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Ooo - not the ending I expected. Very intriguing and difficult. Vegeta dying is disappointing (because I never like main character death) but it is true to the story. I don't see how he could have NOT destroyed the planet if he had survived - his pride would have allowed nothing less. Then there would have been the potential battle between him and Goku, and what if Goku had figured out what had actually happened. I think what bothers me the most is Yamcha being captured. The circumstances don't ring quite right for me - I find it difficult to believe that, as a fighter, he would let his guard down so completely. He knows they are dangerous - he might have hesitated to kill, but I don't think he would let their attack through his guard. I do wonder where the other Z fighters are - maybe they'd ignore Vegeta, but I can't see them ignoring something happening to Yamcha. Yamcha's ki would alert them to something going on. I'm kind of hoping for a sequel :D - rescue Yamcha and bring Vegeta back without memory of what happened. Just think of all the Yamcha and Vegeta angst that could create. :P Well written and I can't wait to see what story you come up with next.

I love you story, can't wait to see what happens next. you are a good write and you show the dark side of the a human beautifully keep up good work

No!! Vegeta cannot die! not on my watch! XD Really awesome, and graphic might I add. I did not expect that. I cannot wait for the next chapter ^^

Cliffhanger!

How I'm going to bear wait any longer?


Another great chapter, btw.

I must confess: I hesitated to read it. I feel that death surrounds Vegeta, and I'm not sure I can bear see it

aaaaaaargh cliffhanger! Amazing, can't wait for the next update!!!

Wow, your last paragraphs have really scared me: I thought it might be the end! But you have shown mercy *sigh with relief*
I can't wait for your next update!

oh no! is the torture over?! =D
that was a ace chapter, had me on the edge of my seat!
I hope skip and the gang arn't dead so Vegeta can get his revenge

looking forward to the next update

Soneji xx

That was the most disturbing and sicknening thing i have ever read. Now I want to throw up and then throw up some more.
Please continue!

The ending of this chapter is beautiful! I feel so sorry for Vegeta and Yamcha, I am glad the rest got what they deserved!! But I am guessing this isn't the end of Skip yet isnt it?

I Love you!

Please update soon!