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You're back! *hugs* I thought you left us forever!! Keep going please!! And hopefully Yamcha comes in soon :)

It is so nice to see this story continued! I love the detail you give to your characters and situations. Please save me from my overactive imagination by posting again soon. Yamcha needs to come into play... one way or another.
Ginia
www.SaiyanHideAway.us

That is hot. I love Vegeta when he's degraded =)
Please continue this story, you've got me hanging on every word.

Please update soon! I can't wait any longer I mena whats going to happen to poor lil Vegita

Finally,
A BDSM fiction from somebody who has experienced the fun.
I must say, I have been very sick and tired of your generic chains-and-candle-wax jobs from people whose repottoire (Sp?) Consists of a pair of furry handcuffs.
Bravo, and I if I may say, more! More!

Ah, I just wanted to say that I LOVE this fic, and I just can't wait until the next chapter

This is a really good story and I feel so sorry for Vegeta(please don't tell him I said that *bites bottom lip*). I'm looking forward to the next chapter you post. Keep up the good work!

Words cannot express how great this story is - I don't care how it sounds, but I love the angst/shame/cruelty of the whole thing. I cannot wait for more chapters. I also can't wait for you to make your e-mail visible! I'd love it if you'd drop me a line- I must know if you have work on other sites, have pointers, or anything else you'd like to talk about!

aww, poor vegeta, but i love it!
update soon!

Calico xx

This story gets better with every chapter; I can’t stop checking it and praying for an update. It’s unusual to find such a well-written story that can both intrigue the reader, keep the characters and situation believable and push at the fan fiction ‘boundaries’ I.E. dealing with unsavoury reality and raw feeling, including the mentions of humiliation, scat, asphyxiation, vomiting, drug taking, split personality, dogged determination and weakness, but you do it superbly.
The emotional twists and Vegeta’s insights make this fic a must read, and the poignancy of Vegeta’s character makes the tortures seem wonderfully/horribly physical. I was wincing as I read it even! I also admire how Vegeta sticks up for his race and make some apt insights on human culture (it certainly ain’t all honey and roses afterall :P)
Your style is Definitely one I could get used to and would like to see more of. So continue please! I’ll be counting on it!

Saiyan_Bride
xxx