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Wonderful chapter. I admit it was hard to read what Vegeta is going through. At least we have two names now and Im very interested just who this guy is that has the hots for Yamcha. To do this to the poor prince to gain Yamchas affection is twisted.

Im really impressed with your writting. You have skill and I eagerly await the next part.

Youve got my attention. What really has me hooked is your wonderful writting. Youve got the characters down so far and Im intrigued with what is going to happen to Vegeta. I wait for the next chapter.