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for Witness

by WinterAxe

person anna
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hihi!
i've jus read ur story and i wanna give u all the thumbs up i can muster~~~
XDDDD i'm one huge yaoi fan~ and i love the way u've woven the story of athrun and kira together ^^
do keep up the good work. XD
there's just this slight feeling of dis-jointedness or breaks in the flow of the story...it might jus be me...so dun take it too seriously XD
chao~ and i'll be waiting for your updates~~~ ^^
have a nice day ^^
person Spinner
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay I'm so happy you updated! i hope the next comes soon! awesome job on the last two chapters!
person Kayaz
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating~ it was very sweet. I can only imagine how difficult Athrun's "coming out" will be, but hopefully they can be together. Anyways, I can't wait to see what you have planned, so please update when you can :)
person pgsmrocks
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! You write very well. I am excited to see you are continuing it.
Definitely excellent asukira.
person Anonymous
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrific as always. Keep writing.
person Kayaz
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice update!! So glad you did!Please update this story again because I am waiting in suspense for what will happen next and I enjoy your writing style so much. Although I'm just one person, please update since I will definitely keep reading.
person M
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I luckily passed around here and saw you've updated. Wow. At last the confession comes. I really like to see what'll happen between them next. Waiting forward for your update. (and also the captured one :D)
person aaron
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, it's good... I hope there's an action though, haha! more!!! more!!! cheers! :)
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I really like this. Athrun is deeply in denial that Kira would feel anything for him, even with seeing a shrine dedicated to him! LOL Cool writing and I totally agree with your sentiments about the having to wait and then wanting to write something. I'm so glad you did!
Oh, and do you think you could tell me how I can receive a message when you update? Like an alert or something? Thanks! I'd really appreciate it!
person Let.It.Die
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see you updated! : )
Can't wait to see what'll happen next between them.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Let.It.Die

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