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for Witness

by WinterAxe

person Saiou-chan
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMNIT! Now I have to wait for an update, and I like this story btw.
person Let.It.Die
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoever posted those last two reviews is an idiot and I really hope you don't let it bother you. Some people just can't help that they need attention and the only way they can get it is by acting stupid. Please don't listen to what they said, there are a lot of people who are actually mature and enjoy this story and can't wait until you next update it.
Let.It.Die
person Fucking Sex Crazy
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're the most disgusting person ever to have lived. All who write about sex should die. You fucking dog. You ARE A PERVERT YOU SICKO YES YOU FUCKING SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO
person Fucking Sex Crazy
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're the most disgusting person ever to have lived. All who write about sex should die. You fucking dog. You ARE A PERVERT YOU SICKO YES YOU FUCKING SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! That's such a good story! I LOVE IT! everything is so detailed, it's incredible! PLEASE post the next chappy!
person Let.It.Die
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story and I find that it's a shame people aren't reviewing enough to make you want to write. I can relate though, it happens to me with all of my stories and I just don't want to write anymore since they don't seem to care or like it. Your story is so good though, I really love your writing style and it'll be a shame if you don't continue it because people are too lazy to hit the review button and leave even a small comment such as a happy face.
Well I personally hope you write more, as I would love to read it and can't stand it when fics don't end. Hopefully you'll feel a little inspiration to write even if you only have a few reviews.
Till next time (Hopefully)
Let.It.Die
person Spinner
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job! I really like the story so far. please update soon!
person M
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Kira :(. That was the worst type of confession he could have. I hope at least Athrun and him will confess to eachother soon and then he can be happy again :). Athrun should really go and comfort him in his sad moment ;). Well, I really love to read what happens next :D.

Also I hope you update your other fic as well :).
person Miss Belldandy
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! Write more soon please!!!
person mikyu
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Wow, that was nice. It explains why kira collects naughty thought of athrun on his PC. He seems to have a lot more problems to deal with it than athrun (does athruns’ parents know about him?), so his only friend about that matter is his PC. Well better then jerk off in the living-room XD.
I have no problem how you showed kira’s parents. Are they his real parents? That role would fit the hibikis better I think. But since nobody knows what happened to Mr. Yamato after Gundam Seed there are many option open to the real relationship between kira and him ^^°. My own conclusion about his disappear in GSD is … he got divorced XD
Athrun heard Kira’s crying? Were the doors open? Did kira cry so loud? (that would be possible XD) … or can athrun simply feel when kira cries? (that is also very possible XD)
Please update soon! So I know how athrun is going to comfort kira XD … he will, won’t he???

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