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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea about Gundam Wing - I don't know anything about the world or the characters, but your summary was so very tempting that I just HAD to try it out.
And now I'm hooked. Very happily hooked, mind you ;D
It's hard to tell you what I loved about WarCraft, because I don't know what is canon and what is your own invention, but I guess I'll just have to assume and try my best. ;D So I apologize if any of this offends you, or makes an ass out of you or me.
I love the consept, the idea of Joined, the WarCraft, the elements... It's so very different and thrilling :D
The portraying of characters was nice too; from description to the way each of their origins and past reflects on their behavior. On this, Wufei stole my heart :) The way he's unbelievably beautiful and hides it with scowling, all the while thinking he's a freak simply because that's what others have always told him; that he won't just trust the Others because they act differently, and simply waits for them to decide they don't what him anymore (he's so sure of it); how powerful he is and thinks it's a bad thing because he can't light candles like all the others can... Very pretty ^-^
I just love and adore your story and hope that you'll write more soon :D :D
And now I'm hooked. Very happily hooked, mind you ;D
It's hard to tell you what I loved about WarCraft, because I don't know what is canon and what is your own invention, but I guess I'll just have to assume and try my best. ;D So I apologize if any of this offends you, or makes an ass out of you or me.
I love the consept, the idea of Joined, the WarCraft, the elements... It's so very different and thrilling :D
The portraying of characters was nice too; from description to the way each of their origins and past reflects on their behavior. On this, Wufei stole my heart :) The way he's unbelievably beautiful and hides it with scowling, all the while thinking he's a freak simply because that's what others have always told him; that he won't just trust the Others because they act differently, and simply waits for them to decide they don't what him anymore (he's so sure of it); how powerful he is and thinks it's a bad thing because he can't light candles like all the others can... Very pretty ^-^
I just love and adore your story and hope that you'll write more soon :D :D
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! Tell me you still update it! Oh please!
One thing I noticed about Duo's story that you may have missed.
Heero introduces himself to Duo but Duo still acts freaked out
later on about knowing his name. Umm... lemmie see if I can
quote it.
"I'm Heero. I'm your First. Your Spirit Talent. You felt me earlier - we Spoke to each other. Remember?"
"Ow! Ow! Ow! Hands off the hair, Heero! That *hurts*! ...how in any given hell do I know your name?"
Much Love.
shoe
One thing I noticed about Duo's story that you may have missed.
Heero introduces himself to Duo but Duo still acts freaked out
later on about knowing his name. Umm... lemmie see if I can
quote it.
"I'm Heero. I'm your First. Your Spirit Talent. You felt me earlier - we Spoke to each other. Remember?"
"Ow! Ow! Ow! Hands off the hair, Heero! That *hurts*! ...how in any given hell do I know your name?"
Much Love.
shoe
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You can find more updated stuff here http://elfnight.livejournal.com/ or here http://www.gundam-wing-universe.net/fanfiction/menu.php?id=535 have fun ^_^
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore what you have written so far. Any plans on adding another chapter? I keep reading the ones you have posted over again (yes, I'm a dork). You're a gifted writer. Keep up the good work.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this when you first posted a while back. It's been enjoyable so far, and interesting with powers. Hopefully, you will consider continuing it.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Echo, I'll cry if you don't update soon. That and probably go crazy, because this story is just that good.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update soon!!!! I keep checking to see if you've written more...I think I'm going to cry :( if you don't update soon!!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I've been reading in the GW fandom for about six years now, and I have to tell you that your AU is one of the most enjoyable, fun and well written AU fics I've read in this time.
Also, I'm a huge Wufei fangirl, so I like that this fic has lots of him! I get tired of seeing him overlooked. I also liked the elements that you chose for the boys. Spirit fits Heero perfectly.
Thank you for writing this! :)
I've been reading in the GW fandom for about six years now, and I have to tell you that your AU is one of the most enjoyable, fun and well written AU fics I've read in this time.
Also, I'm a huge Wufei fangirl, so I like that this fic has lots of him! I get tired of seeing him overlooked. I also liked the elements that you chose for the boys. Spirit fits Heero perfectly.
Thank you for writing this! :)
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay my first review. I love this story so far, and can't wait for more!! I would love more!! Please ^^
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I love this story so far.... In fact, I check up on it every day to see if it's been updated... I seldomly review, I'm so bad at it... But i also read your other story and liked it... I look forward to reading the next chapter!! *squirm*