rate_review Reviews

I am certainly not used to the extent of the violence, but I just had to find out more of what was going on. It's a very interesting plot and the story flowed brilliantly. You have always been one of my favorite DBZ writers and this compliment could never do you justice. I loved how this story turned out. Thank you so much for posting this story for us to read! I hope you continue to write here, so that I may read all of your works. Have a great day!

I didn't want to read such a long story in one night, but you made me do it. :D This isn't exactly the type of story I read- not a fan of real world intrusions or extra characters- but it's also the kind of story for which I've been looking, and didn't quite realize it.
Gokuu and Vegeta were my first slash couple and have remained my favourite for the 14 years I've been in love with Dragonball Z.
Also, for the five hours it took me to read the whole thing, I listened to over half the playlist without even knowing it. Depeche Mode has been my go-to band for Gokuu/Vegeta stories for years!
So, yeah. This was a wonderful read (despite the negative Chi Chi aspects, though I've come to accept that in this kind of story). I think the parts I liked even more than the sex were the interactions between Vegeta and Bra. There wasn't enough of that in the series. :C

Mann..I wanna talk about ch. 8 n 9 even though I'm starting 10...I think it's 8 n9 the train wreck ones...won't give away anything..but this is my favorite line “Baby, why do you make me do these things to you?” Oh my gosh! I held my hand over my heart at this line..ah..so sweeetttt! I loved these two chapters..loved loved loved them! I love this whole story..well I haven't read it all yet obvisously..but I know that it will end awesomely. You're an extremely talented writer..the intensity of the two stories..Spiral n Jaded..are ah-maze-zing! Just wonderful! I mean words cannot express how amazing these stories are..the way the words flow and describe each scene perfectly. Oh My! I'm totally speechless n jealous at how good you are. lol but your awesome..that's all I can think to call it is awesome..such a stupid word..but how do you describe something that makes you feel the amazing wonderful feelings I get from reading your stories? I mean really..damnn..lol Ok I'm done gushing..for now. :D

Oh my! I'm loving this story..I was so excited when I found the sequel to Spiral...I've only read some of it so far..but can't seem to tear myself away from it..it's amazing..You are amazing!..Wow..I really can't say any more right now...I'm like speechless at how good this is so far :D

Amazing story!!! You even kept them both in character(don't ask me how).
I'm going to go look at your other stories now, I hope they are just as good as this one has been!
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Even though this story is over I had to tell you how glad I was that you finished it. The story was wonderfully thought out and the resolution was beautiful. I wouldn't have minded seeing the boy's reactions, Bra's to their's and revenge for Chi Chi's underhanded trick, but there was not lack as it all ended. Thanks for the amazing story.

My, isn't Bra the insightful. Interesting. I like the parallel.

Oh and obviously I can rest easy now since it doesn't look like Goku lost everything.

Thanks for a great read.

Macha, it is now 1:10 am, i started reading this soon after you left, be thankful, cause i know i am. An amazing story! Feed your ego till she's fat and happy. And if you think i'm gona be reading anhythign else tonight, not even Your ego is big enough to keep me awake.

My favorite part is when Bra takes her tree out and plants it. Its just such wonderful imagery. Also, Vegeta answering telepathically at the end was great. It shows just how connected they are.

Awesome ending!!!!!!

Things finally worked out well, except that Goku will have to repair his relationship to his youngest.

Which will succeed in time. :)