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Gah, I just wrote out a review and lost it in AFF's stupid moment of downtime. :( I'll just try and remember what I wrote...

I'm sad that the story had to come to an end, but I think it's the right ending for the story. Things might not be completely resolved, but it's just enough to be satisfying. The final exchange between Goku and Vegeta was full of just the right amount of hope and those last two lines were perfect. And I loved the symbolism of the bonsai again - that was a nice touch. Thank-you so much for writing this story - it's been a compelling and addictive read all the way through.

YAY, another chapter!! The End?? Will you do another story or is this it? I love the ending to this one. Its much happier than I expected it to be. Which is a good thing because I'm a happy ending fan. I enjoyed this story a lot, although I didn't think I would. I usually don't go for this kind of stuff, but you made tasteful enough that it didn't bug me too much.

It's...over? Sad eyes. Wow....so...truly amazing. Really, I am absolutely in love with the Spiral/Jaded series. Love it love it love it! I was not expecting that car crash with Bulma. It was like one of those car commercials where you're just not expecting to see a another vehicle slam into the side of another's car. Wow, shocking! And I love it that Vegeta was still worried for her. He is such a dynamic character and you always do a great job in portraying him as the honorable, prideful saiyajin he is. I like how this ended and I like the dialogue between Vegeta and Goku. They are a great couple. ^_^ Wonderful! Great chapter, great stories, great everything!

Long time no hear from...how are you? I see you've posted many stories since the last we've talked. Send me an email when you get the chance. I'd love to hear from you.

HOLY SHIT!! I forgot just how much I liked this story until I read it again. I really hope there is an chapter update SOON. Like I said before, I can't wait to see the confrontation with the "Bulma found out" thing. Hope Goku gets to keep the stuff he made at the forge. Anyway, please put up another chapter soon.

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

well maybe vegeta is finally getting things straight in his own head now and kakarot can finally show him some better things.

Holy shit, that was HOT! I love this story more and more with each chapter. I'm still waiting for the whole Bulma found out thing to hit the fan. Great work and keep those updates coming.

:O Oooo....Ahh...Why wasn't I aware that you updated?!?! God, this chapter...was so good. Amazing. Freakin hot and...wow. I think you know you did an awesome job. So yes. Great stuff.

Goku is such a wanna be submissive. Now that Vegeta has realized how enticing that is, I hope they continue to take advantage of it. His submission is so voluntary, while Vegeta's needs to be forced from him.