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wow, this was intense. i can't believe goku seriously killed vegeta. but at least he brought him back. pretty ingenious way, if i do say so. great work1

Awesome chapter as usual. So....wow. Goku definitely broke the rules there. I wonder how much trouble he'll be in and what the kais and other worldly beings are going to say. I see that Goku and Vegeta's little secret may not be so secret soon. The fact that Goku ripped Vegeta from death will not go unnoticed. And wow...I absolutely love your details in everything you do. You don't leave the reader guessing on how things work and what's happening, you're so in depth and detailed. I loved it. Goku bringing Vegeta back was intense and perfect! I also loved Vegeta's line "never do this again." I'm guessing he means bringing him back from death. Oh my! Poor confused saiyajins. Love it! I'm excited to see what Bulma may happen upon and what she'll say. Poor woman, too. Jeeze. Again...loved it lots. Keep it up!

Oh-oohhh.....my god....:0 This is just too amazing, too astounding....I want to scream and cry! I am so in shock right now..I don't even know if I can leave a proper review! This isn't over..right? I just have to say that this ending of this chapter is so abrupt and actually horrifying that I am totally left speechless. Wow...intense, insane, so awesome...so terrifying and violent. AH! I love it so much.

Intense. Well-written.

Ok...I'm back...and with a better review this time. Well...I loved the build up to this situation. I was very surprised that Vegeta was so nonchalant about the whole thing. It seemed very unlike the arrogant prince to just allow Goku to take him over...like he didn't know what to do anymore. I thought the whole thing was going to turn out safe and calm...but...I was wrong. The chain work and knife stuff was very surprising, mainly because it was plain old Goku doing it! The whole scene was pretty disturbing....and it made me so happy! This whole scenario really makes you see how messed up Vegeta is. His confusion is evident as he struggles with the control Goku has over him. And you really make Vegeta appear a confused, angsty character. And the sad part is that Goku is being sucked into his madness, too. The poor guy is going to turn into Frieza some day. I was also surprised by Goku's not wanting to stop when Vegeta told him to. The anxiety the prince must have been feeling is so intense. Would he stop, would he keep going? I wonder what would have happened if Goku didn't stop. Strangely, he really seemed to want to keep going. Goku is loosing himself and turning exactly into what Vegeta hypnotised him to be-Kakarotto.

I loved Goku's anger...and I loved his vicious way of leaving torment on Vegeta. Your details of pain and agony are amazing and it truly shows how freakin powerful Vegeta is. Ripping your hand through a knife would be quite painful I believe. Basically, everything that led up to the end was so disturbing and violent I had to run out into my dorm hallway and tell everyone about how amazing it was. Really...my brain is buzzing after this and people who don't even watch the show listened to me rant about the extreme awesomeness of this fanfiction. So...basically, Goku's anger toward Vegeta was so wonderfully written, I couldn't believe it. The end was so...ah! I can't get over it. Like I said earlier, it was abrupt and so...violent...and I read it about three times. And the thing that really gets me, is that Goku never wanted to do this. He didn't want Vegeta to hypnotise him and have control over him. He didn't want his Kakarotto side to kill Vegeta. And after this whole build up, this situation that was supposed to be purely discovery and release...turned out terribly. So terribly! This horrid death was just so well-written and so horrifying, one can actually feel Goku's panic. that moment of freezing numbess as he looked at Vegeta's lifeless body was so well-written and detailed that i will have to read it again and again. And the horrible sadness is that Goku volunteered to do this for Vegeta, so his Kakarotto side would not kill Vegeta. Yet it was Goku's harshness and saiyajin anger that ended up killing him anyway! How...horrible...and amazing...and you're a genius. So...this is such a great story and I really can't wait to see what happens next. i may die....just like Vegeta. Great great stuff!

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

holy crap! is it just me? or did goku just kill vegeta?!?! wierdness!

I very much enjoyed this chapter, Macha. Love the parallels you set between Vegeta and the bonsai trees-that was very poignant, and yet, subtle at the same time. Perhaps Goku's time, love, and patience will allow our crooked little Saiyan Prince to grow straight again? And, as Bra pointed out, our prince is actually very young, and so perhaps will be acclimated to once again growing tall and strong without constant attention or assistance, or the need for a highly controlled environment. Again, I loved this chapter. Good work, as always, Macha!! *hugs*

~Hoshi

That was such a fascinating chapter - I think I need to read it again to pick up all the details I'm sure I missed the first time through.

its good that vegeta seems to be showing more interest in bra's life. i did expect him to not allow her to pet his tail though, he's mellowed.