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This journey of Goku's is quite fascinating and I'm keen to see the end result of it. Vegeta seems completely unchanged by the whole situation, so I'm also intrigued to see if Goku will be able to affect a positive change there. I'm enjoying your writing very much and I particularly like the insights you offer into these characters.

oooOooooh, very nice, Macha! Definitely can't wait to see more!!

Good chapter usual. I just love the way you write. I was glad to see Vegeta back to his fiesty ways. I'm interested to see if this situation will escalate. Whoever is threatening Vegeta and his family could be quite dangerous. I'm also excited to see the interactions between Goku and Vegeta when they finally plan to meet up and use Goku's...hmmm...new objects. I loved the fight between those two. Vegeta just would not stop. What an obsessed saiyajin! Haha. Well...good stuff. I love it!

Wow. That was good. I like how you describe the scenery and the personalities. Keep it up.``

I made sure to read this as soon as I saw you updated. I was happy when I saw the third chapter was up! Well...very good as usual. I kinda liked this little side story, and I'm even more anxious to see where this goes now that Goku has the.....tools...to work with. I wonder if Goku is excited to use these or feeling a bit apprehensive. The fact that he will have Vegeta pretty much rendered helpless could be a bit rough on the kind hearted Goku and I can't wait to see where this goes. Will there be hurt feelings, will there be angst, or will both saiyajins be pleasantly brought closer? Ah...it's late, and I can just keep going on and on about the amazingness of your writing, but I should end it before this becomes paragraphs long. I am also excited to see what Goku will learn from this as Nabou said...and perhaps Vegeta will learn more about himself as well. Yes...Great stuff!

wow this is a turn of events, i hadn't realized you had started this. nice, i like it.

I simultaneously love you and hate you, Macha. LOVE that you have a new chapter up, LOVE how wonderful it is, how you described the scene between Goku and Vegeta, made us notice involuntary actions, movements, sounds, and his enthusiasm for Goku's release at the end. Hate the cliff hangers you leave, and that it's just never enough!! But over all, it was AWESOME! More, woman! *SPORK*

I loved it. This story always makes you want to read more and more. I'm excited to see how the next events will unfold. Really great writing, as usual. I just love all the...Vegeta angst! It makes me smile...and cringe...and I just can't wait to see what happens next. GREAT STUFF!

Once again....Dude .... too good!!! I WANT MORE hahaha I'm a fic slut

Ahh yet another wonderful story from the great Macha. I have finally com back to the world of Fanfictions. :) even updated Dominus De Cupiditas. Would you believe I was gone so long that I had forgotten much of the styles? I saw beautiful stalker was up. That's pretty awesome. But this is your story sorry...As always I give you mad props. Wonderful it is. Wonderful. Drop me an e-mail or im sometime.