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I've only just started reading the manga as I found FMA when animecentral ran the whole anime at xmas. From this story I can tell it is very different from the anime and I am so looking forward to reading it.
I really like this story and look forward to the next update, however long it may take. I like how you haven't rushed the relationship between Roy and Ed, it's nice to find a story that lets them take things slow (although I do love the RoyxEd smut too-what fangirl doesn't?!?!)
I have no idea what the code is but that could have something to do with my headache, lack of sleep, the fact that it's 3:30am or a combination of the 3 XD
Keep at it and I await the next brilliant installment.

That . . . Ed, I love how mature you have made him out to be, of course I would expect Ed to that humble and such, and some parts are a little out of character but nothing extreme. The story is written well and original, thanks for submitting it.

Chapter 2 review I think, it was short and to the point so no worries, nice solid chapter

Brilliant. I'm often a little lost as to what events are actually taking place because your description of action is sometimes unclear. However, I love this fic and your portrayal of Ed and Roy. Please continue.

I remember reading this a few months ago when it was only two chapter!! I'm glad you updated! XD I really love this story!

I just finished reading this and I really enjoyed it! I haven't read all the manga eaither! but have gotten up to where they go up North! I think you are doing a fine job with it! I really think you have a good plot idea and could expand on it if you wanted to! I also think you are doing a great job on building up Roy and Ed's relationship slowly.

Keep it comming!

AWWWWW
I am so happy and I really really needed this today.
I just love when you put stuff up.
It's always a great read.
so happy I am babbling , so I am going to stop now , but so cute!!!!!!!

I don't think i've posted a review for this story before but I just wanted to say that i like it, like the rest of your stories. I like the way Ed and Roy interact with eachother and just about everything else about it. i cant wait for more.

awwwww.... I loved it!! keep up the excellent writing!!! can't wait to see an update!!! later!

ps. I hate envy

I enjoyed this chapter. Very nicely done, and the fact that Ed is still having flashbacks, even at moments when he is thoroughly enjoying himself with Mustang.. And as far as the television thing, the series isn't exactly accurate in the way their technology works, or they wouldn't have high quality color photos that could manage to capture candid shots of like the ones of Elysia Hughes. So, I don't think it has to be exactly the same as our world. (Heck, I included an ultrasound machine in mine for that reason).