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by TrulyWished

person tallia
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
give in Roy, give in...haha ^^ but wow! awesome story, haven't read one like that in quite awhile, please keep it going, please. :D
person Hikaru_9 (aka Hikaru!)
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very cute chapter! The going through the candy and gifts was my favorite part, though i don't think they have TV yet in their world. I'm pretty sure it's still limited to black and white motion pictures. Cain and Riza is cute! He needs more love, i think they'd work great together! lol! Looking foward to more.
person TruElle
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way your developing the relationship between Roy and Ed. Their confusion about what they are starting to feel towards each other and their refusal to talk about it is brilliant. Also Cain\Riza is very original and working really well in the story. Please keep going, can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. The Riza/Cain pairing is a different one. I love that the two guys both remember they kissed, but won't say a thing to one another. I just wonder how, as things progress, Ed's going to deal with the memories, and if he's ever going to tell anyone.
person Niia
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So damn good! Poor Riza though...still what the hell. If it ends with Ed in Roy's arms, it's worth it!
Hehe, I have liked the story from the first time I found it.
I'll be checking if there's an update at the end of the week.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT!! XD haha anyway I'm intersted in where this is going so update soon

kiki
person Frozen_taho
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I kind of feel sorry for Riza but in the face of RoyEd frolicking, I really can't bring myself to care. This is good stuff. Please update soon.
person Niia
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No wonder Edo is havng traumas, good thing Roy is there to help him get through it. Hmm, I feel just a little sorry for Riza, but what the hell! Please continue!
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. I felt so bad for Roy, and I like that Ed is still feeling uncomfortable.
person michelle
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! meaness to winry!!!!!!!!!!! she deserves it !!!!! i feel so bad for ed though. and riza. i hope riza gets someone. i love her. i know it's not the reason, but i would go to a whorehouse before i would go to winry too XD

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