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by TrulyWished

schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really nice. Love how you're showing the trauma that Ed is going through from the whole thing. I really like this story and even if nothing more comes of the relationship between Roy and Ed than friendship, it would still be an excellent story.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::Grins:: Love this ^_^ The idea of Ed afraid of men, and being touched, is awesome. And poor Riza. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* now I have to be logged in to review.
It's so like Ed, to reject Mustang's help even when he needs it. I myself prefer top!Roy but each to their own ;). Yay to more mangaverse fics! It was a well-written chapter, Ed being a ladies' man lol. Do update soon :).
person Niia
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this is soo good. The situation Ed and Roy got into and how they pulled one rope to get out...nice ;) I like to find a longer chapter every now and then and you really seem to put time and effort into your work. I'll be waiting for more of your fics!
person Rucina
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good i wanna know what come next so i hope that it doesnt take to long to update ^_____^
person nomdeplume
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was pleased to see there was a second chapter. I almost thought this was going to be a one-shot. I enjoyed chapter one and look forward to seeing a relationship between the two develop. Very nice.
person ursweetheartles
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY UPDATES!!! so /that/ was depressing. but thats okay, it was awesome anyways :D i hope your muses are less of a bitch this time around *fic love*
person flamingpaintbrush
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeease update this story! It's amazing and addictive!
person Meh
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what they say, you can't speel Raped without ED! XD ahahah! Poor thing though... I am sorta glad Mustang didn't get raped though, I hate that cause it makes him seem uke-ish! Put poor little Ed. Exciting though, I liked it. Urm.. could you e-mail me if you update? shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com
person MELaiya
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I love this. Please hurry and update soon.

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