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for Forgotten Touch

by Tears

schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my God...*nosebleed*
You MUST do more Elricest. As a matter of fact, do more of anything! I've read all of your stories now and I think I'm addicted to your writing! > _ <
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more of this. There isn't enough Elricest in the world. Very well written and in character. Well . . except for . . like, the sex . . yeah. I hope you do write more.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was HOT. I have to say i'm a total Ed/Al shipper...If you do have random updates about this pairing, I'm SO there! This...gahhh *melts* I'm happy.
person The Laughing Man
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, there is a single problem which merits an ENTIRE STAR DEDUCTION!!!
Why did they move to North America within a month when they have work to do in Germany?
Other than that, this was well thought out, well written, and simply beautiful. The love, and the fight, where very good. Except the sex, the character were portrayed true to animation, and the idea was very good, and I enjoyed reading this. Please, do continue, but do not feel rushed, you can do a lot with this.

Courtesy of,

The Laughing Man

(I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes)
person Rucina
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WOW that was really really good please write more

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