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naughty blonds...naughty mustang..i like this story...please write more

I like how Edward is becoming more confident, because that's what Sabrina was all about. She gained the confidence to go after what she wanted. Nice tribute to the movie when Hohenheim looked in the rear view mirror by the way.

what a wonderful update! i must admit i was wondering about roy, but that's just cause i love him so much! oh my, i have to wonder what will happen when ed finds out about winry's wedding. i mean, he's apparently thinking of saving himself for winry since he still thinks he loves her and doesn't love russell, but what will he do when he gets the news? will he, in his despair, sleep with russell or will he go home for the wedding, wanting to talk to her and end up facing roy? man, i am so anxious to find out!

update as soon as you can! but i also enjoy "little light of love," so i look forward to that update as well! good luck!

now that i know the reason thanks for the update. also thanks for giving us a glimpse of what's going on back home. i glad that al finallyshowed up as well and kudos for making him a hughes. i can't wait to see what you do next.

nice! I'm new to FMA fanfiction, but this looks like a very nice place to begin! hope you'll continue soon!
is there going to be more of Roy soon? there hasn't been a mention of him since Ed left for France. how long will he be there by the way? and will we find out what is up with Paninja soon?

oh, one thing though: you said Ed is 19, but you also said it's not legal for him to drink yet. I'm not sure if you know but the legal drinking age in France is 16, so it is legal.
hoping for more....

I'm catching up with this story after several weeks away, and I'm really enjoying reading it. It's fun to see Ed develop some of the qualities he has in the anime (the fighting skills, the interest in research) in a different way and a different time. I like that he sings, too. The way you've worked in other characters like LIng and Paninya is also entertaining.

I also like what you've done with Ed and Russell. I thought you did a great job with both sex scenes. Drunken Russell was pretty funny, too. The only thing I'm dying to know is, what has Roy been doing all this time?

i want you to know that your lemon wasn't bad so please do not feel that you are doing a bad job in fact you are doing great (you have me hooked). i can't for the next update. by the way are we going to visit roy soon or are you going to have them not interact at all until ed goes back to the states like in the movie. thanks

Oh God, I love this story!

For a little while there, for some reason, I couldn't review, but now I can and I'm happy! Woot! Okay, so this was an outstanding chapter, and I like the pairing, but I'm just wondering how you are going to transition from RussxEd to RoyxEd (isn't that what's going to happen, or am I mistaken) Anyways, I love the tournament and everyone included in it. I hate when I get so excited about a story I begin to shake. Isn't that really, really weird? Oh well, I just really got anticipated on who would win the match, because, you know, everyone wants Ed to win. Oh and I LOVE the little smut, you did a GREAT job. Mmm, RussxEd.

I doubt Edward would say anything about it to his da... or maybe he would... but not about.. certain things. I wonder if his da would be against the idea of him with another man... I mean, it would take his obsession from Winry. I like Drunk!Ed... mmm RussxEd.

I hate Winry anyways.

I somehow knew Russell and Fletcher had been together, it's impossible not to make them in some kinda relationship, be it romantic, brotherly, friendly, etc. It's cute though. I wonder what will happen with Fletcher and Riza...that's kind of an unexpected couple, but very fresh I suppose. ^_^

I love all of their personalities... ED IS SO ADORABLE!!! He's... well, plain and simple, a uke. XD

Anyways, I'm really diggin' this story, so please e-mail me when you update please!!! shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com

lovelovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard

Hey, I liked the sex both then AND now! This AU is amusing in that I really really am rooting for Russell here. He and Ed are sweet together ;-; Thanks for writing it!

yes! an update! and even though russel/ed isn't one of my fav pairings, i did like how you handled the lime, and their relationship in general. though i am waiting on pins and needles for my dear roy's reappearance. i look forward to the next chapter very much! until then!