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for You Belong to Me

by squallstorm

person The Candy Made Me Do It
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it... And I loved the last one, too, don't bum yourself out about it. I love the blonde pile thing. (Meaning... Edward with Russell, Heiderich, Al... that thing XD)

Can't wait for an update, love this story to death, and, Winry has to die... The end :3
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Loved it! That was great, very smexy! I love Sabrina! Your doing a really good job with this. Continue Please. XD
person milky
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, that was wonderfully hot! I like how awkward they were around each other, until finally they just got carried up in the moment and put two and two together *_* Nice to see a fic where the First Time isn't anal and where no one is quite sure what's going on afterward. Very tasty! Hope to see more.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
these last two chapters were great! though i'm so waiting eagerly for roy to come into the picture! when you said LA, i was seriously like 'ROY!' but he could be in greece too right? *puppy dog eyes*

keep up the great work!! XD
person milky
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Ed...I'm on the edge of my seat here, wondering what is wrong with him. You do a great job of pulling us into his head and letting us know just how he feels and how well he is/isn't doing. Please do continue!
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sick!Ed is so cute! *cuddles sick!Ed* I love how Russell takes care of him like that. Although... I'm very curious about the whole 'not calling in' thing... hmm... Do I sense... PLOT? *gasp!*

One little technical thing, though... you put 'tinnitus shots' Tinnitus is ringing in the ears (can be a precurser to major hearing loss or deafness). I think you mean 'tetanus' is lockjaw (can be caused by scratches).

Can't wait for more! Evil cliffie!!!!!
person Rucina
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is getting really really good i am curouise about how you are gonna get winery to sit on the glass?? XD

and i wanna see where the ed/russle is goin!

Pleasssssse update sooon!!!!!!!
person milky
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I feel so sorry for Ed here! It's rough to be that sick...hope they take good care of him!
person TLQ
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adored both the original and remake of this movie and you are keeping true to the spirit of both versions. I very much look forward to more.
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is such an interesting idea. I love the movie Sabrina (both versions) and was curious how you would manage it. So far, it's very good.

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