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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, if I could just slap some sense into Roy...
Lovely, lovely. I loved how you started showing Winry's gears turning. Does she realize that Roy might
be more emotionally involved than normal? I can't wait for you to update. This story is getting better and better.
Lovely, lovely. I loved how you started showing Winry's gears turning. Does she realize that Roy might
be more emotionally involved than normal? I can't wait for you to update. This story is getting better and better.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*screams and runs around in circles.*OMFG WHAT'S GUNNA HAPPEN WHAT'S GUNNA HAPPEN?!?!? I have a feeling Roy's gunna go after Edward but that's just me....oh god I hope he does....please make him go after Edward.....PLEASE!!!
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ed. That idot Roy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Roy, stupid stupid stupid Roy.
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it. sorry it took me so long to read. skool has been a hassle
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! But damn what a tease! You give us "spread your legs" and leave us hanging! I feel so bad for both Ed and Al. They both stand to be hurt alot.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ed! That has to be the most painful thing a parent can say to a child!
Duh, Edward. People are staring at you cause your hot! I can't get the image of him in a pin-stripe shirt and slacks, with his golden hair pulled up, out of my mind! Yummy!
Another great chapter!
Duh, Edward. People are staring at you cause your hot! I can't get the image of him in a pin-stripe shirt and slacks, with his golden hair pulled up, out of my mind! Yummy!
Another great chapter!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. Poor Ed. I hope his da comes around and accepts him. I also hope things work out well between Ed and Roy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...chapter 21/20 had a few twists that I did not see coming. Cool. I really did not see how Da was going to react to Ed's gay news. That was a surprise. I expected Da to be loving and calm like he was in the past but like in real life you never know how anyone reacts to any type of news. The other twist I did not see coming involved Scar's family...that was interesting. And special. Maes and his family impromptu visit was unexpected but Maes and intelligent work will always be hand in hand no matter what universe. Like how Gracia in any world still is a powerful lady....just with a glance she can change Maes's direction. It is sweet how Roy is with Ed right now but it is a little bittersweet knowing what is coming. Still...why do people think they can intermingle the personal with business? (like marriages...etc...too many people go for the materialistic...so sad.) Cannot wait for the next chapters. Good job.