rate_review Reviews

I do adore this story. It's very well written and I am very much enjoying how you've having the plot progress. Plus it's based off one of my favorite old movies. Five stars, love. :3

love it. hope there will be more soon.

yes i am still out here. one of your loyal readers who loves your story and can't wait til the next chapter.

I love this story so much! You actually got me to go out and rent the movies! You write very well, and the RoyEd doesn't hurt much either. I look forward to everytime you post a new chapter and this story is one of my all time favorites!

I look forward to chapter 18!

Still reading and enjoying the story. I first thought that it was Roy overhearing Scar's conversation about Nina, but that doesn't seem to be the case, so now I'm stumped.

Of course we're still reading! This story is so good! It's got everything! I normaly don't like modern day settings for these characters but this just works so well!

Of course we are still reading. Your loyal audience will wait for you...you are busy, have other stories, and your muses work when they want to. Good chapter 16/17. I was worried what would happen when Ed and Scar faced off. I did wonder how Ed would win against Scar. You wrote a good fight and Ed did a great job going up against Scar. Ed should have nothing to be ashamed of. Scar may have been so desperate that he would have unintentionally killed Ed. If someone was compressing my carotid artery I would have tapped out too! Hope Ed does not get too hurt by Roy...Roy needs to realize what is happening to himself before he blows everything. Who was listening to Scar? Did anyone over hear the first conversation Roy had with his mother? Please continue. I still love the movie Sabrina and I think you are doing a good FMA twist on it. Keep up the good work.

That bastard Scar...although we did see a bit of his story. Nina? You'd never guess with how much of a dick he is... Thanks for updating! I have missed this story!

Still reading! Don't worry. I love your take on Sabrina. I just wish RL didn't intefere so much with your writing, but Oh Well! that is what RL does.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

It was great you should continoe to write more to this story so we know if roy and ed get together. Also to see if ed beats scar's ass into the mat and teach him a lesson he needs.