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I love this story, and can't wait for more! =^.^= And that last chapter alone...oh, God...I don't think you meant to, but my perverted, gutter-lining brain stuck in three different little innuendos while I was reading it. ^^;

...Do amazing things with his body...*giggles* ^///^

That was a great chapter. I enjoyed it very much. I really like how this follows the basic story line of the movie and yet at the same time has so many unique points. I can't wait to read the next few chapters. =)

I enjoyed that very much, it was a good building chapter. There was just one thing wrong with it. It was too short! I want more!

YAY! Updaate! awesome chapter! shows the growing relationship between Mustang and ed! and I AM waiting on A Little Light of Love! I cant wait till you update it!

Hey, I'm out here! I'm reading! This is my official review to letcha know I love this story and am paying close attention to your updates. Are Russell and Roy gonna duke it out over Ed? Seems likely. WOOT!

not only still reading but anxiously awaiting the next chapter. i can't wait to see how roy acts when he meets russell.

YAY! You updated! Awesome chap! Mustang is such a conniving bastard! I Love it!

Glad you updated. This is one of my favorite stories. I think the chapter was fine. I liked the interactions between Roy and Ed. Their relationship needs time to grow. We need to see what makes them themselves and so we will be able to appreciate it when they grow and change later. Face it...Roy needs to learn how to be more human and, in the movie, Linus learned this from Sabrina. Roy needed to see the martial arts aspect of Ed and to see him more of a grown up. Besides we need Ed to get to LA. Ed vs Scar....now that is going to be a battle. Can't wait for the next update.

I'M STILL HERE! Hehe, sorry I'm a bit silly tonight. That was another fantastic chapter and I can so feel the tension building up between Roy and Ed and it is so delicious! I like how Ed's feeling are slowly changing under his nose, and how Roy is way more attracted to Ed then he is willing to admit to himself. I'll be eagarly awating the next chapter! Much review love!

Oh WoW!!!! This is my favorite part of this movie! I can't wait to see how you make it in to RoyxEd. Everything you have done so far has been very creative and interesting. I am loving your twist on this story! XD