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Oh god! I didn't think we would get some Roy/Ed so soon but then we did! SQUEE! Another great chapter! Poor Roy! How could Ed hit his pretty face? Ooooo! The plot is getting so thick and juciy! Winry vs Roy over Ed! It can't get much better than that! I feel so bad for Al, I'm glad he wasn't there to see that. I can't wait for chapter 12!

Oh God you are killing me with this. One on My favourite movies is Sabrina( both Juliette Binoche and Audrey Hepburn versions. I love this story you are writing , please continue .

I really enjoy reading this story. Your Roy and Ed are really great. Please Keep going

Another good chapter. I like your version of Sabrina. Well, that evening certainly ended on an interesting note. Roy and Pinako can be quite cruel but then they are rich and used to having their own way in everything. Roy needs to lighten up and Scar is out there somewhere. Can't wait for the next chapter. Glad you updated.

I'm a huge fan of this story. The character developement is great and I've been looking forward to see where you're headed with the plot.

Seriously, it totally makes my day.

OH MY GOD!!! EDWARD, DON'T FALL FOR IT!!! SHE JUST WANTS YOU FOR YOUR BODY!!! PICK ROY INSTEAD!!!
ASOTA

that was a slick the way you had roy recognize ed and winry didn't. this story is so the shit to me. even though it's taken a while for us to get to it i just know the next chapter is going to have some slick old roy and ed action. i can't wait for the next update.

That chapter was delicious! I don't know how else to describe it! Oh no! Please don't let Ed fall for the temptation of Winry, let Roy get to him first! And besides, think of poor Al? You wouldn't do that to poor sweet Al would you? Roy! Oh Roy! Please keep that sister of yours in line.

Not that we can blame her, Ed is a stud.

What a treat to be able to read a new chapter in each of your stories tonight! This was a really good one. Ed has really grown up to be able to realize that having a physical relationship with Russell when he can't love him is not fair to Russell in the long run. That part of the chapter was very well written. I also liked Ed's letter to his Da. Very touching, and showed how he has matured. And now that he's back home, the real fun begins! I wanted to yell at him to run away from Winry, though. She's not the one for you, Ed! Oh, well, I suppose he has to get her out of his system. I liked the way you wrote him in the scene with her, though. He kept up the cool and confident "man of mystery" pose as long as he could, and then he got home and it all caught up with him, and he dashed away. Pretty funny. I also liked that Roy recognized him right away.

Alright! Ed is finally home and we can have some Roy and Ed ACTION!!!

I loved the Sabrina movies (both of them) and I never imagined using the storyline for this. I love it, especially since it is Roy and Ed.

Don't take too long to update this story, pretty please. **bats eyelashes**