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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was...wow! Are you ever gonna continue this?
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked that, very well done and comedic in some areas. It was also nice how you sorta kept him in character in bits of it. Very nice. ^^
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've certainly set it up for a sequel where Roy overheard Ed and invites himself in. If you do a sequel, I'll look forward to it.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Owww.... Im Guessing Automail Up The Ass Would Hurt. Lol. Good Story Its The First FMA Story Ive Read On This Site Great Job.
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*crazy fangirl*
Tres hawt! I would love to see a sequel to this! :) There can never be enough RoyxEd in the world... and this is only the second or third fic I've read that has Edo actually getting off the man! The world needs more solo!Edward!!! Kudos and awesome job!! I really like your writing style as well; it's descriptive but not overly so. This is usually pretty hard to accomplish!
PS: If you would like, I could beta for you. You know, read over and fix minor typos/gramatical mistakes. Just a thought. Send me an email!
Tres hawt! I would love to see a sequel to this! :) There can never be enough RoyxEd in the world... and this is only the second or third fic I've read that has Edo actually getting off the man! The world needs more solo!Edward!!! Kudos and awesome job!! I really like your writing style as well; it's descriptive but not overly so. This is usually pretty hard to accomplish!
PS: If you would like, I could beta for you. You know, read over and fix minor typos/gramatical mistakes. Just a thought. Send me an email!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please continue this. Roy's just gotta have him!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, very hot! I loved your descriptions, they were so good that I could really imagine what was happening. Very nice work. This is great by itself but I'm sure a sequel would be good too. *looks forward to that*
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-dies of major blood loss from the nasal cavity-
That was beautiful, hun. Geez, so hot!
That was beautiful, hun. Geez, so hot!
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmm Ed/hand OTP for the fucking win. I like how very sensual this is, we have all the little details. I can almost feel the heat of the shower versus the uncomfortable tiles.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drool* Oh yesyesyes~ This was lovely! :D
Something though: rapping his fingers tightly around it... - You meant 'wrapping'
There were a few other typos, just things like wods being squished together and the wrong version of words being used, but it's nothing a quick look-over or beta wouldn't catch. ^^
Something though: rapping his fingers tightly around it... - You meant 'wrapping'
There were a few other typos, just things like wods being squished together and the wrong version of words being used, but it's nothing a quick look-over or beta wouldn't catch. ^^