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just wondering...has this story been abonded? if so maybe u could say as much in the summary so I'll know? I would like to see more, but I won't hold my breath if you say contary...

Please update this story I love it

gawds!! when are you going to update this? or ur other one with the crazy mustang, kidnapping Ed!! I must have more!! please don't make us wait any longer!!!!!!!!


kiki

Well, I must say I am trully impressed. After returning to my FMA obsession this story managed to completely enrapture me. Everything in it is fascinating... the style that flows smoothly, the plotline, the characters. I admit it has never interested me to read a slave-Ed story, but this one is amazing. It has managed to capture the very fine balance between all the features in Ed's personality and somehow, even it may look like its not, here, in this story Ed is more in-character than in any other I have read. Roy too.
Humble but proud, protective and loving, jealous and obsessive, in this story Ed has all those sides blended in one perfectly balanced mix. I always have pictured Roy as a closet romantic guy, who's more inclined to stay quiet and sit at the backgroud (this considered ONLY in his private life of course) and redelegate the *communication rights* to his other half. In this story I see him exactly as I always wanted to read Roy Mustang pictured - all calm and composed, the perfect gentleman, caring, loving, powerfull and above all having this quiet gentle strength flowing from him, that makes his loved ones and his friends to want to follow him even in Hell. I know it's far too presumptious of me to say this but I just cannot stop myself - here I see Edward getting more and more agressive, self-assured and jealous, obsessive and protective towards his Master, the General, and eventually Roy falling behind, quietly leaving Edward to deal with all around him (outside work of course) and just *inserting picture-Roy sitting quetly, reading the newspaper and drinking coffee, while Ed is ranting and yelling at him for acting improper for his stature and getting drunk again at some party and paying too much attention to women and if he goes on like that Ed will leave and such... to which the General only smiles and say "yea yea as you wish my love, you know I have eyes only for you, and btw will you please choose my next clothes and see if we have to attend that reception parties and you know you are dealing with all this stuff right" and the sort..
Gahh I know this sounds pathetic please don't be mad at me for putting words in both Roy and Ed's mouths...Its just how I see them, the master at some point becoming owned by his property
I hope you will update this story soon... I know at least I will be looking forward to the next update

You have a nice story there, I like it a lot! Those slave stories are always interesting XD
I strongly encourage you to write more for this fic has *a lot* of potential (all those slash...) :oP
Good work! ^.^

I just wanted to drop a note and say that I am enjoying this story very much. I read the first two chapters awhile ago and I just checked back on a whim to see if there was more. I'm very glad you updated it. I would love to read more. It's a very unsual angle and I'm intriged. Will Ed ever see his brother again? I like the D/s stuff it's hot! The confrontation with Scar was cool. Please update again soon if possible! ^__^

yay! update love XD I was begining to wonder if you were still out there or not XD

anyway I'm liking the story thus far and will be watching for more

kiki

oh thank god! chapter 4...whew...i was wondering how much longer you were going to make us wait XD

I really love it and am now heading off to read 5 and 6

kiki

wow...chapter 5 (really it's 6 because chapter 4 is there twice XS) was HWAT!!!!! holy s@#$@!!! very nice...can't wait for more update soon

kiki

I love to read this one, it's sweet without cloying and they move together easily.